mmmm! i love this. i don't normally like stories where poor lynz gets used, just because i love her, but this is beautifully written and i can't wait for more.
i'm so subscribing to this because it's still so young and i can not wait to see where you're going to take it :D
oooh suspenseful!!!! (I know it's not a word but I'm kinda like shakespeare, I just make them up! --- OK, I'm nothing like shakespeare but still...) Loving all your stries, updatey soon please? I'll love you forever!!!!!