January 2nd, 2013 at 10:20pm
This comment is for notweirdbutunique because she won first place in a contest of mine.
All right, now I'm going to admit that I was dreading having to read this because I thought it was going to be messy like most stories written by five people, but boy was I wrong. This has to be one of the most unique fanfictions I've ever read. The first thing I really want to say is you're all doing an amazing job. I like that each of the guys has a different past and that they met through the home. It's easy to follow (as in you guys don't mix the story up when writing different POVs, something I've seen in too many large co-writes), thankfully, so that's definitely a plus. I like that each boy has a different reason for being in Saint Andrew's. And your characterization has definitely made this story excellent. I like that each boy has their own personality, if you get what I mean. They're all riots, let me say that right here and now.
Oh man I just. I really am having a hard time putting my thoughts and feelings towards this story into words, and I mean that in the best way possible. This has got to be one of the best large co-writes I’ve ever read. The fact that everyone has a different background and past and the way everyone incorporates their thoughts and feelings into the story is beyond amazing. You’re all doing an excellent job, really. I can’t get enough of it and you better update soon!
I’ve most definitely subscribed and I’m anticipating what’s next!
And as for the comment on the title, I’m sorry you had to read that. That’s a bit sad that someone would take the time to say such a petty thing.
But your summary pulled me in. Liam and Niall being the scared ones, that's not that hard to analyze with Niall being a snowflake as Liam being his soft, sweet self. Makes me wonder how Harry, Zayn and Louis are in this. Haha.
I also loved how you labeled each chapter with their numbers. Very unique. c:
Now on with the story. At first I was a bit confused because of my lack of knowledge for prison. But I read on and seemed to like it. Liam is surprising. I didn't think he'd act that way when he was first placed in. (I totally thought someone was going to rape him! That'd be freaky) Harry, oh dear, this boy is scary. Louis's one made me smile. Really?! He talked too much. LMFAO. That is gold. Zayn is quite quiet, eh? He likes to shut people out, I suppose? Niall, my goodness, you have got to be kidding me. This story makes me go wild. (wrong choice of words hahahaha.)
This is really good and I liked it. I hope this will be updated soon as well. :)