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  • dawn of light

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    To be honest, I was quite anxious to read this story you recommended because I don't usually read these types of stories.

    But your summary pulled me in. Liam and Niall being the scared ones, that's not that hard to analyze with Niall being a snowflake as Liam being his soft, sweet self. Makes me wonder how Harry, Zayn and Louis are in this. Haha.

    I also loved how you labeled each chapter with their numbers. Very unique. c:

    Now on with the story. At first I was a bit confused because of my lack of knowledge for prison. But I read on and seemed to like it. Liam is surprising. I didn't think he'd act that way when he was first placed in. (I totally thought someone was going to rape him! That'd be freaky) Harry, oh dear, this boy is scary. Louis's one made me smile. Really?! He talked too much. LMFAO. That is gold. Zayn is quite quiet, eh? He likes to shut people out, I suppose? Niall, my goodness, you have got to be kidding me. This story makes me go wild. (wrong choice of words hahahaha.)

    This is really good and I liked it. I hope this will be updated soon as well. :)
    January 2nd, 2013 at 10:20pm
  • The Real Mitt Romney

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    This comment is for notweirdbutunique because she won first place in a contest of mine.

    All right, now I'm going to admit that I was dreading having to read this because I thought it was going to be messy like most stories written by five people, but boy was I wrong. This has to be one of the most unique fanfictions I've ever read. The first thing I really want to say is you're all doing an amazing job. I like that each of the guys has a different past and that they met through the home. It's easy to follow (as in you guys don't mix the story up when writing different POVs, something I've seen in too many large co-writes), thankfully, so that's definitely a plus. I like that each boy has a different reason for being in Saint Andrew's. And your characterization has definitely made this story excellent. I like that each boy has their own personality, if you get what I mean. They're all riots, let me say that right here and now.

    Oh man In Love I just. I really am having a hard time putting my thoughts and feelings towards this story into words, and I mean that in the best way possible. This has got to be one of the best large co-writes I’ve ever read. The fact that everyone has a different background and past and the way everyone incorporates their thoughts and feelings into the story is beyond amazing. You’re all doing an excellent job, really. I can’t get enough of it and you better update soon! tehe

    I’ve most definitely subscribed and I’m anticipating what’s next!

    And as for the comment on the title, I’m sorry you had to read that. That’s a bit sad that someone would take the time to say such a petty thing.
    December 26th, 2012 at 06:20am
  • loveleycliquet

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    dammit, I really love this.
    December 9th, 2012 at 05:59am
  • bbkrox

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    i really like this story! its such an interesting plot and story line!
    December 9th, 2012 at 05:15am
  • louis tomlinson.

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    I haven't commented on this story before but I will now since I'm here and I'm in a good mood.

    So I freaking love this. Love love love love. I love Louis and Harry's relationship, I love the way Louis takes care of Liam, I love how Harry is so angry (I find it attractive, sue me) and I love how Zayn loves May and how Niall is just Niall, doing his thing and trying to stay alive and makes friends with Liam. I love it i love it I love it and the hiatus makes my heart cry. But I still love it.
    December 2nd, 2012 at 08:12pm
  • Reckless Dreams.

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    I'm not gonna lie. At first I was hesitant to read this story... I read it and became intrigued. Like it's so unqiue and different, I wanna see where it all goes. :) as they say, curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought it back. It's one of a kind and I do like it! Keep up the great job guys, I really cannot wait to read more. There's an interesting topic at hand, so far I like where it's going. It messes with my moods, haha. I'm rambling...
    Update soon!
    xx
    November 28th, 2012 at 10:28pm
  • Reckless Dreams.

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    I'm not gonna lie. At first I was hesitant to read this story... I read it and became intrigued. Like it's so unqiue and different, I wanna see where it all goes. :) as they say, curiosity killed the cat but satisfaction brought it back. It's one of a kind and I do like it! Keep up the great job guys, I really cannot wait to read more. There's an interesting topic at hand, so far I like where it's going. It messes with my moods, haha. I'm rambling...
    Update soon!
    xx
    November 28th, 2012 at 10:28pm
  • Sanne_

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    This is amazing! Just how you write and a not very common subject. I really love this!
    September 19th, 2012 at 01:26pm
  • DaniGates

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    Oh man. I love this. It's like a surprise in every chapter.
    More soon, yeah? :D
    September 11th, 2012 at 05:46am
  • a7xaddictfoREVer

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    i love this!!
    What did Zayn do?
    What did all the boys do to end up there.
    Can't wait for more(:
    September 8th, 2012 at 02:08am
  • wishful;

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    This story is just so unique! I love how the boys have their own stories, not already being friends all at once, one having a girlfriend. It is all amazing and you portray the character's feelings and personalities well. How they all cope so differently with their situations - from beibg the oldest and always on the lookout for others to the negative idiot who still manages to be cheeky to the one who does not want to have to do with anything. Perfect.
    September 8th, 2012 at 12:47am
  • a7xaddictfoREVer

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    WOW!!!!!!!
    Ive seen this story around and im just now reading it...why did i wait so long this is awesome!!
    its so original and no one has thought of this.
    i like how they all look out for each other in a weird way.

    Mr. Green
    September 3rd, 2012 at 04:53am
  • Chasing Cars

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    So I actually subscribed to this story quite sometime ago and I finally found some time to read it. Let me tell you that this story is so unique and original that I absolutely love it. I like how they all don't really know each other and they aren't famous. I like that they're like criminals. It's all very exciting and new(: Nicely done.
    August 20th, 2012 at 02:00am
  • young volcanoes

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    The idea for this story is so original, I love it! I just got caught up and I need more!
    August 18th, 2012 at 04:13am
  • collectivision

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    This is wicked. It's a fabulous idea and despite the fact there's five different authors I honestly couldn't tell. All the chapters flow together so well. I love this.
    August 16th, 2012 at 11:28pm
  • peggy carter.

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    I have to tell you guys, this is a great idea. <3 Honestly, you've all captured their personalities so well and you've each of you given them so much depth. I can't wait to see where this story goes. The first time I read this, I was on my Kindle, and I had no idea this had five authors. I seriously thought it was only one! That's how well you've written this! You're all such amazing writers. I'm a huge fan. Very Happy

    Also, I can't believe that *incredibly rude* comment. People these days.
    August 10th, 2012 at 11:11pm
  • StereoSoldier;

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    HARRY!! <3 i love it!
    August 6th, 2012 at 06:19pm
  • StereoSoldier;

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    HARRY!! <3 i love it!
    August 6th, 2012 at 06:19pm
  • dmbbmb123

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    i love it please update :)
    August 6th, 2012 at 01:37am
  • hallucinogenics.

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    BMTH title, yet the story is about 1Gayrection?

    Lame as fuck..
    July 27th, 2012 at 06:39am