I'm so stoked for the next chapters! I also like your writing style loads, and how you manage to portray the teachers so well in spite of using only a few words.
I can't wait for more of this. Gah! There is just so little put up right now and I am seriously impatient because I have never been able to find a story on The Breakfast Club.
As others have said, I also love The Breakfast Club. I find it very hard to find stories about the movie on here, this being the second one I've found. I can tell that this is going to be a wonderful story just because of the first chapter. It really drew me in and you captured the principal and janitor perfectly. Amazing!