The Brat Pack - Comments

Whew! Finally caught up with all the updates. I'm loving this. I'm amazed at how spot-on all the characters' personalities are. You took what John Hughes gave us in one movie and blossomed it into 5 different universes that the characters live in. The movie hinted at what the kids' home lives were like, but you've delved into it in your own way without deviating from the movie's style. I enjoy that very, very much. I also enjoy your style of writing a lot. It's very simple and fits the tone of the story.

I can't quite see where the plot is going/if there even is a plot, but I am still enjoying it a lot. can't wait to read more!

I love The Breakfast Club! Its one of my favorite movies. And I am very excited for your next update :)

I love this sooo much. It is fantastic.

Phenomenal!

Aaaaah this story is so amazing! I wish I had some useful feedback, but I really don't because everything about it is purely perfect.

The Breakfast Club is by far my favorite movie and I'm so in love with this oh gosh. ;w;

I love this movie and I like what you've done with this story following the movie up. It is really good and can't wait to see more.

Brian makes me so happy (: I'm so glad someone decided to write a story like this!

Oh
My
Goodness

You have no idea how perfect this story is! To the way you write, to your character development, to the layout, JUST EVERYTHING. I can't even make complete sentences because I am just in awe of this story. The way you're able to recreate the atmosphere of the movie in this story is magical and flawless. This sounds cliche, but when I read this, it actually feels like I'm there. In the dirty hallways. By the cold lockers. Next to the indifferent teachers. Facing all of the scowls. Everything is so smooth that it is seriously blowing my mind. This is original, flawless, captivating, and just flawless flawless flawless.

This is such a great story. It really feels as though it's a proper continuation from the original. Definitely subbing to see where this goes as you've got great characterisation etc here. Good Job! x

PLEASE UPDATE! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I AM IN LOVE WITH THE BREAKFAST CLUB AND ANYTHING THAT HAS TO DO WITH IT! UPDATE!!!!

I absolutely love this so far. I love The Breakfast Club and I always wished we could kind of know how things worked out after the movie ended, and I think you've done a great job in doing just that. I really can't wait to see how things play out further. You've done a fantastic job with the characters. Everything they say and do is just perfect and really fits their characters.

This is a beautiful, beautiful, work of art. And the fact that you're using the original cast? UGH! I'm loving this so much. And you're a fabulous writer as well, your flow and grammar are great plus you have a great voice for the characters. The movie doesn't give THAT much but the way you're integrating what it does give? I can definitely see this as being the after.

xox

Good ol' Bender

love it :) i like claires persona

Thank you for entering my promo, I really liked this story :)

"He never saw Allison wave back."
This line. THIS LINE. Oh. My. Gosh. I smiled sooo hard after reading this line. SO VERY HARD. There might have been a giggle in there, but I'm not sure. But in all seriousness, I love this story! It's amazing.

I FUCKING LOVE THE LAST CHAPTER. I died. Thank you.

Your writing is spectacular, and this plot line is pretty original and fantastic (as far as I can tell). TBC has been my favorite movie for years so I'm pretty excited to see what's in store.

<3

Loved the updates, but really looking forward to the rest. :3

I always felt bad for Brian...