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  • Fridaysbloom

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    This is amazing please update it again soon
    June 11th, 2013 at 06:43pm
  • XxXSinfullDesireXxX

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    This is really good. But it's sad knowing that there most likely won't be a happy ending... :(
    June 11th, 2013 at 06:28pm
  • sohohugges

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    i just love this
    August 8th, 2012 at 07:10am
  • Hannaleigh Dawn

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    Still liking it. I did notice you flipped between tenses in the beginning. Just something to look out for. I like it. Keep going!
    July 24th, 2012 at 12:47am
  • Hannaleigh Dawn

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    I'm tearing up just from this first part!! Please write more! You're wording is beautiful and captures the emotion brilliantly!!
    July 23rd, 2012 at 06:51pm
  • Lovenature24

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    I love the idea and your layout is amazing. There's not much I can say, advice wise, so great story and can't wait for your next update.
    July 21st, 2012 at 02:25am
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