Motion Sickness - Comments

dude im barley on chapter 15 and i love it lol!

ahh that was good but she cant leave she has to stay and make things right with ape. More soon please!!!!!

I just found this story yesterday.
Good God, I love it.
=].

I love how you describe Taylor and Frank's relationship.
It's really raw and real and it shows how complicated actual-life relationships are.

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GOSH; you don't even flippin' know how much I adore this story... : D

It's pretty disenheartening that Taylor had to choose between April and Frank like that... If I was in Tay's position, I probably would have died... Because really, removing herself from the situation like that was probably one of the best things she could have ever done with her life... :] But, I know that Frank won't let her leave for good.. Because seriously, this is an IeroRomance, and... they end up together..

I mean, they basically have to, right? ;|

P.S. ; Did you name Taylor after your friend? :]

<3

Alrighty its been a while since I've made an analyzation comment on meh story so YAY I shall do that now. =)

Ok, first I would like to say that yes it is very unfortunate that she had to do that. I try to base a lot of my Taylor's (I talk like they're all my children, it almost feels like it xD) actions out of her state of mind and how I want you guys to see her personalitiy. So, if I've been doing a somewhat good job, you should see that she's extremely stubborn (duh) and slightly insecure. A lot insecure actually. In all actuality she's fighting with herself over Frank because deep down (I don't know if these are spoilers or not) she does love Frank, but shes gone so many years demanding she will never do that again that she's convincing herself that that love is the dumbest thing ever. So..think of it as two different Taylors in her head, and the one that hates love is winning. Make any sense?

Whenever I said awhile back that I had to rewrite a chapter because you guys weren't responding how I was aiming for, it was because I wanted you guys to be angry at her. I think it was whenever she wouldn't tell him she couldn't swim? You guys were talking about how pissed you were at Frank (most of you) and I bet now if you go back and read it you'd think 'Oh my god Taylor you stupidasscuntbitch he fucking walked to the side of the pool and just fell in and gave you plenty of time to get off his back you're so fucking stubborn'.

Thats what I wanted then. Didn't happen, but hey, its difficult to think badly of the main character. So I made her be a bitch to him when he apologized. Still being stubborn, yet beginning to become annoying. That seemed to work. I liked the reaction to that. =)

She's stubborn, and insecure, and she hates it (I hope this is kind of obvious because I mean, I want this to be in my writing, not my comments), so she had to leave. But yes, Frank won't let her go forever. Actually, I do quote a text message from him to her in the next chapter: "'You followed me...'".

And yes, this is an IeroRomance. They will be together in the end, but I'm telling you, you won't like how it happens at all. Tera and Ina, don't even breath a hint. ;)

And for the last part? No, I didn't name her after the Taylor that said that quote. I actually have ANOTHER friend Taylor (who I actually hate like no other now and constantly tell her to go get in a fiery car crash multiple times a day) that I stole it from, because I like the name..well I guess that means I stole it from my other friend too, but anyway.

In many ways though, Taylor is just like me, Tera is right. I am actually going to Anger Management for my..anger problems, because I'm brutally honest and say things before I think (such as 'go get in a fiery car crash' or 'go fuck yourself' or such things that Taylor says). And, yes, I don't believe in love. This may sound odd, but no matter how many chapters I write in this story I don't believe in love anymore. I did actually have one bad relationship, and he was verbally/mentally abusive (I only dated him for nine months but still), I've never had a father figure and my mom recently got married and divorced in the last few years. Love and marriage is the most hurtful and horrid thing god ever created. I hate it, and I'll never fall for it again.

Unless its Frank Iero of course. Then theres may be an exception or so. =)

-Andi Romanov

P.S.: The Locator made me cry tonight. THAT IS A SAD FUCKING SHOW. :'(

GOSH; you don't even flippin' know how much I adore this story... : D

It's pretty disenheartening that Taylor had to choose between April and Frank like that... If I was in Tay's position, I probably would have died... Because really, removing herself from the situation like that was probably one of the best things she could have ever done with her life... :] But, I know that Frank won't let her leave for good.. Because seriously, this is an IeroRomance, and... they end up together..

I mean, they basically have to, right? ;|

P.S. ; Did you name Taylor after your friend? :]

<3

woweeee
you kick maaaaaajor ass for updating, you know that right?
and what afabulously bruuuutal update it waaaas!

more soon?
x

ps. thanksss for my comment :]

Oh my god...
that's pretty much all I can say.
or maybe Wow.
Just...I never thought they'd get into an actual fight.
I can't wait for more, xox

*new reader! :D*
this story is freaking amazing!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

GAHHHHH DIE TAYLOR DIE!
update asap andi
<3

whoa taylor's being a bitch..
hope you update soon and tell us what is it with her past. and what happens to T and frank. i feel sorry for him...
oh the drama!!! lovin' every part of it :)

this story is one of the main reasons i bother checking my e-mails for updates.it's amazing :)

Whoa.,.huge drama.,.loved it.,.

awh.,I feel bad about Taylor.,.,mOre sOon.?

Wow, that almost made me cry :( Loved the chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one. The sooner the 'worse' is over and done with, the sooner the 'better' is coming, lol.
xox

o.m.f.g! honestly, this story makes me wanna get on my compute every day to see if there's an update. and my computer's fatally crashing right now and i shouldn't be on it, but this story is absolutely worth it. i'm so totally in love with story and i'm so fucking happy that i clicked on it that one day so long ago.[wow, that totally just like came out of a story book! :D] but yeah, keep up the amazing work..i can't wait to see what you have planned.
-kelly :]

MAYBEEE!!!! if we all punched him hard enough, all at the same time, in the EXACT same spot... it would leave a GIGANTIC swelling sensation and you can use the cliche little line of
"And as his side began to swell, I finally realize how badly my heart swells everytime I saw him"

=)

haha, ... that was horrible.

Anyways.
GOOD CHAPTER!!!!! X)
I like the fighting scenes, reminds me of what one of my friends did to her girldfriend. It made me laugh so hard

Can't wait!!!

Wow. Amazing story! Your a fantastic writer, I absolutly adore this story. Update more soon ? :]

*subscribes*

D=
This chapter made me sad. I think you have bad timing.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
NO NO NO NO NO.
I had to get that out.

That's an amazing quote. Fer real.
ily.

(Brad's never done anything btw. ESPECIALLY A FUCKING ENERGY DRINK.)

=]

I almost started crying when Ape told her she wasn't leaving with her... I felt so bad. Update soon!

Holy.Fuck.
You reeeeeally need to update again.
Like now.
I need to know what happens.
That last chapter had me bawling.

oh!!!

GREAT FOUR CHAPTERS THAT I JUST READ!!!.... they were a bit depressing and brought me down a bit... but that is OK! I still love you!!! X)

my computer is the most retardest thing (And yes that IS a word because my computer does not underline it in that annoying little red squiggley line that EVERYONE hates :] ) <---- AHAHAHAHH guy with fat chin!!! >.<

I think you should update, *cough!* I mean.... What? o.0

so back to my story about my computer... it refused to show me that you updated... and I found out yesterday... and Ilove you.... and those two ll look like the beginning of llama... and I'm eating mac&cheese while reading your story... and it all fits because I was slightly hammered when I read the first chapter over again... HAHAH..... Anwho.... and this has gone on a bit to long...

X)

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Pilgrim

*cough* ali *cough* cough*