I thought this was really quite good overall. I have to say, I really wasn't expecting Gerard Way to feature! But that was fine.
Something I noticed: where you have used BBCode for italics, it has printed because you used <i>, for BBCode you need to use square brackets like so: .
But that's a small matter.
Because I have a short attention span, sometimes things like this seem a bit dragged out to me, but I guess it helps the ending, and maybe you should check with someone who has a better attention span.
Something I noticed: where you have used BBCode for italics, it has printed because you used <i>, for BBCode you need to use square brackets like so: .
But that's a small matter.
Because I have a short attention span, sometimes things like this seem a bit dragged out to me, but I guess it helps the ending, and maybe you should check with someone who has a better attention span.
I liked it :)