Super Girl - Comments

Can I write an article review for this?

This is so totally how I imagine Kyu would be to a girl omg the ending made my heart feel warm and fuzzy *_*

It's funny that I found this now, cause I'm writing a one shot for a friend featuring Yesung and in my story he's als the worst boyfriend ever. We're in sync! Anyways, I only read two chapters, but later tonight I'll read the rest. So far, I think this is great. They all seem to be well in character, mostly Leeteuk and Donghae. Gotta love those two :)

Ugh your writing is so magnificent I literally can't. This was sad but also lovely with the perfect dash of comedy and I just loved it. God bless Kyuhyun and his perfect soul and also you and your perfect writing.

I HAVE NO WORDS FOR THIS PERFECTION. I'M SO JEALOUS. AND WHY DID YOU HAVE TO MAKE HIM SING TO HER? I. CAN'T. PERFECTION. /dies.

The ending...it was perfect ;A; I really love how you just knew that they were a couple at the end, like there was no scene needed of where he asked her out or anything, we just knew because the feelings were always there♥ And when Kyu started singing Supergirl it really made my heart melt and I really wished it could be me in her place >< Awesome story with an equally awesome ending.

Aww, Kyu's so adorkable. I'm glad Katie was able to finally find someone who made her happy and was able to get away from Yesung. I'm rather horrified that Katie sustained injuries to the point of having to be taken to the hospital, but the bit about the flowers from the SuJu boys and how they went to such lengths to keep her occupied and happy made it better. Teukie's protectiveness, even when she was safe with Kyu, was adorable and really sweet. I think you wrapped it up perfectly and the only thing I'm sad about is that it's over. Oh well. at least I have your other works to look forward to, no?

Yesung... just... Urgh! Never in my life, have I ever wanted to punch a character so bad. Seriously, a punch and maybe a hard kick to somewhere a bit important would be satisfactory. Maybe... But, yay for KyuKyu to the rescue! Major points to Katie for standing up to Yesung, despite the consequences. I can only hope that Katie will be okay and that Kyu can explain everything; as well as Katie not backing down and spilling on what all's gone down.

By the way, so glad Kyu was able to intervene as I was honestly terrified for Katie and what would happen to her if Yesung had been able to contine his abuse in the current situation.

HOW COULD YOU? THE SHORTNESS~



I love this so much, even if I want the abusing maniac to go to hell.

BUT. THE SHORTNESS.



I hope for an update soon, gorgeous lady...and Gengie lover. Bwahahaha.

Wow, that person is really rude. She didn't ask for your criticism. If you don't like it, you move on and stop reading. Seeing as you posted not one, but 3 comments, you're pretty ignorant.

Sorry, just had to let that out >< ahem... I LOVE THIS STORY! xD ♥ My bias from Suju is Siwon but you're making Kyuhyun seem so gentle and sweet that I can't help but be attracted~ I think it'd be cool if you maybe had a chapter from Yesung's point of view so we can maybe get him a little and understand why he's so damn rude lol but just a suggestion, I love it either way! Can't wait for more :3

Awww, I adore how Kyu got so defensive when Wookie explained things. It's cute. I also find the fact that they pile on eachother for amusement rather... well amusing. I feel a little bad for Sungmin, though considering he was on the bottom of the pile. As for Katie, I'm torn between wanting to hug her for what she's going through and wanting to shake her and hope it knocks some sense into her. May I also say that if I were Katie I think i'd slap Yesung for what he did? And oh goodness Kyu kissed her! I look forward to your next update and I apologize as I realize my comment isn't exactly the most... central thought-wise.

Also, I didn't notice any mistakes. :)

@ Stanislavski
Would you just leave it alone? I don't know what I ever did to you. I'm here to improve my writing and its not going to be perfect. In fact, I know it'll be far from it. I'm trying to be civil here. I'm aware of my mistakes and my imperfection and need to improve. You don't need to shove it in my face, okay?

A bad writer can never be an artist.

@ Stanislavski
I'm sorry that I made a mistake. I am human after all.

"I've always been fascinated with languages. European, African, Asian..." Do you notice the mistake?

I despise your style.

OMGGGG. I hope Yesung didn't see that...or maybe I do. Hopefully Kyuhyun won't let anything happen to Katie. c:

YAAAAYYY!! AN UPDATE!!! =D

I am sooooo scared for Katie, I'm literally sitting on the edge of my seat as I read this! XD I know it's silly, but when Kyuhyun was kissing her I was like "DISPERSE!! DISPERSE!! This is great, but BEFORE THE EVIL MAN COMES BACK!!! XD"
...even though I do like Yesung in actuality, his character in this story scares me.

This was a super awesome chapter!! ---MORE CONFLICTS?!?!
Oh god, I don't know if I can take any more tension. XD

I'm so late in commenting on this. Sorry! This chapter makes me kind of sad, really. Yesung's so... cruel to Katie and she can't really do anything to protect herself from it. Oh goodness, and poor Kyu. He's just trying to ensure that she stays safe and Katie won't hear any bit of what he's saying. The end of the chapter has me worried not only for Katie, but for Kyu as well. With Yesung's attitude toward him(Kyu) and the way Kyu clenched his jaw(which I'm sure Yesung saw and will probably pick up on), I can't help thinking that before this is over a fight will break out between the two boys.

Okay, may I just say that the moment I clicked on this story, I was nearly knocked out by how pretty the layout is?? XD I kinda paid homage to it for a few minutes before I continued to read...(seriously no problem there, no...perfectly normal. XD)

Anyways...to the story. I really do love your writing; you are a handful of people here that can actually give a great balance of detail and "show" the readers the story... It really felt like I was watching some drama featuring the members of Super Junior.
I was startled at the angle you used with Yesung... I had always been told by my other SuJu fans that he was really nice... I guess it was a shocker to me.
But that's not a bad thing here, especially when you made it convincing enough. Honestly, I'm a bit scared for Katie...

This is great though! Your writing is amazing! You'll do this without me having to say but STAY AMAZING!! =D