Primal - Comments

I'm only on chapter 8 and I'm liking it so far. But I don't understand why when some people talk (like Jessica) her sentence is in italics. It's kind of confusing for me. Other than that, liking it so far and can't wait to read more!

Really enjoying this :3
Update? Pweese? x

I really missed reading this story, you should...well uhmm...how do I put this....update. like now.

I love it! Lol. She reacts to Matt immediately and, let's be honest, who wouldn't??? Poor girl, though. ZV interrupts and now she's frustrated. But hopefully, she can spend the entire vacation, ah, working out her frustrations. ;-) It might snow here tonight (however, I doubt it). I'll see if it puts me in the mood to write. :D

I missed this story! And I think you did well with the sex scene. Update as soon as you can. :)

I think you write the sex scene very well can't wait for update

LOVE IT!!!!!

love this update soon

It makes sense for him not to want her to see anything yet. The less she knows, the better. Yeah. She's just warming up to him. Watching his more violent side might freak her out. lol. And she's already freaked enough about this marking thing, though it seems she's gonna handle that one. ^_^

Oh snap its time

love thsi please update soon like nowish lol

Me gusta update soon

love this please update soon like nowish lol

I sense some foreshadowing here, that something IS going to happen while they are gone (of course!) I think Jessa and Jimmy are ADORABLE! So sweet <3

Love the new chapters♥

DAYum.

cant wait till Rae gets marked :)))

Looks like she's going to fall into this life pretty easily, but Matt still has left something out. She's going to melt into his arms without knowing what happens after she's marked. That's not good.

More soon?

More Pleaseeeee

The explanation might take her a bit to accept, but she needs to know and understand the danger she's in. Then...yeah, he needs to mark her and keep her safe. :-)