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PinkMartini (100)

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Member

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♀

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28

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United States

Note: any grammatical errors are purely stylistic choices.

July 31st, 2012 at 08:20pm
butterflywings16 (200)

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Ghoul of 2016

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♀

Age:

27

Location:

United States

So there's a few grammar problems, but it's mostly with the amount of ands in one sentence. Other than that, I really like this story.

July 31st, 2012 at 08:00pm

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