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  • PinkMartini

    PinkMartini (100)

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    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Note: any grammatical errors are purely stylistic choices.
    July 31st, 2012 at 08:20pm
  • butterflywings16

    butterflywings16 (200)

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    Ghoul of 2016
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    So there's a few grammar problems, but it's mostly with the amount of ands in one sentence. Other than that, I really like this story.
    July 31st, 2012 at 08:00pm
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