Spineless - Comments

I don't even know what to say. This is amazing.

Wow. This was so heart wrenching. I was reading it, thinking, "Oh gosh I hope this kid doesn't die in the end or something, or get depressed and off himself." because i've seen that in a lot of stories and it's not a bad concept but it's over done nowadays and i've been looking for new reads.

I couldn't say in words how magnificent this was. My eyes were so wide while reading this and the next sentence couldn't come quick enough. The writing was so well put together it flowed like a poem and then the description of Leo and what the kids would do to him, and what they thought of him, it broke my heart. I hate things like this and I know stuff like this does happen (not this far) but it does, and you wrote about it so elegantly it was such a huge shock to me. I honestly just couldn't read the words fast enough.

I don't know if I was proud or tad disgusted but I loved the ending. I don't care how sadistic that sounds, I was kind of glad Leo took a stand, even if it was maybe blown out of proportion. This was so amazing, I can't say that enough.

Ugh beautiful.

This is amazing... I'm speechless.

Oh man, this was excellent. I might be sick, but the last part, about the guts smeared on the locker made me laugh.

I stumbled across this on your profile, and wow. This is absolutely amazing. It's so...emotional, and it shows what's happening in schools. I love the narration, and the layout is just plain and simple--easy-to-read, and fitting to the vibe of the story.

I love how dark this is--and I find it a sort of...notification. Like a warning, of some sorts.
This isn't the most pleasant thing to read, but only because of the content--besides that, it was beautifully written and terribly true.

omfg i might cry why must you write so perfect GOD i'd give you like a proper not rambly comment but it'd pretty much be the same as kennedy's .vv
but seriously i really wanna quote what you wrote on my profile but i can't remember it somewhere a long the lines of abstract entity and new york best seller list but christ you could get on their without even trying WATCH

dark is good 100% of the time especially when you're writing, and this is really fucking good. really eerie almost and the style is interesting too, i like the repetition of "Look at Leo" or "Look at that faggot Leo" and all the examples of what they did to him and essentially everything about this is great and it works really well as a one-shot which is why i'm excited about the fact that it's not. THE ENDING so good i'm thinking you should give me at least 70% of your writing talent but i'd be happy with 5%