The Dreaming Smile Above the Skin - Comments

Cryingcryingcrying, and as soon as Brendon was all, "There's always a plan B," I couldn't. It was already unf and then it became unff but there were emotions mixed into it and I can't even. The sexual tension was doused and the feels were pained. Amazing job. (Do I make any sense, like, ever? XD)

U just made something really sexy kind of really sad and ur not only killing my ovaries but also my emotions ugh

Omg I need more!!!

YES UPDATE
*reads*
GAH SO CUTE.
Ugh, this is too perfect.
Update soon!`:D

AH It's just so good ;-;
I need updatez

This chapter-heartbreaking and sadness and the description is wonderful. AND SO. The A/N gives me hope, and Brendon's only full sentence of the chapter as well, I want them to enjoy their time because, hey, at least it'll be a good way to...go...excuse me. *SOB* Anyhow. Wonderful and saddening and maddening because now I need more. :)

But...but... hecan'tdie!!!! DX DX No! Im so sad, and anxious to read the next part!

Do you like watching me sob as my heart rips in half? Seriously, just whuuut, no, no, nononononono, this can't happen, not Brendon and I can understand Ryan's reaction-It's how I'm feeling, too. I've been reading this story since the beginning and I feel wrong because I haven't said a word. Have I? If I haven't, I'm ashamed, but oh, no. This is terrible (in that good, heart-wrenching way stories should be) and just...aw. I feel so bad for the couple and...aw.

The background is awesome :)

Hoorah, an update! :D Well, if the doc says so... I guess I can relax. :) I feel Ryan's anxiety, though.

Oooh, I love this so far, but I'm so worried about Brendon! :( I have the worst feeling about his condition... But no, I can't even think about tragic endings at this point in the story! For now I shall just enjoy the utter cuteness of it all. <3

Ehr merh gerd!!! yay!

When will we find out whats wrong with bren?!

Aww yay!!

i like this story a lot but idk i can't seem to stay focused on it because it's all bunched together and looks like one big paragraph and for me, i don't know about others, it just looks intimidating to see it all bunched up.
but yeah i really like it (:
<3

Oh my goodness, shortest fillier in the world = cutest filler in the world. Brendon getting all bouncy and such with Ryan around and the movie with Ryan being all weird and Brendon being stubborn. D'aw. This is just way too cute for its own good.

Gah. It's so ajhfsoialkfji adorable. I like short chapters because they kind of highlight the important things. :) The last two lines made me smiles.

I really like this so far. Ryan is a hopeless romantic, but it's pretty cute. And Brendon sounds delightful. I don't think I noticed any grammar mistakes so kudos, dude. And, I shall subscribe.