The Dreaming Smile Above the Skin - Comments

A very gripping chapter to say the least. I feel for both of them

@ leeyahbvb97
Okay okay wait "amazing writer" I'm just beginning to deveop good writing habits in all honesty and I attempt description but I'm not as good as most people >.<. BUT LIKE HOLY CRAP THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH and I'm glad you're trying to keep it together, I know it's hard. It's difficult writing some of these things in all honesty.

as you slowly kill Ryan you are slowly killing my heart i cant keep it together its just so sad and the fact that your an amazing writer and your chapters are greatly descriptive just ugh i just cant sometimes.

SHIT OMG BDEN HELP HIM! NOOOOOOOOOOOO
OMG cryingcryingcryingcryingcryingcryingcryingmyeyesout

Ryan's so much stronger than he gives himself credit for. But I'm wondering if he should have gone to check on Brendon first

@ killjoy from detroit I know, I know. PLAY GOD ALL YOU WANT honestly. You can even write an alternate plot/ending if you'd like. Overall it's really all down hill from here >.<

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Wai, oh, wai, do you make me cry? Gah I'm dead ;-;

Cryingcryingcryingcryingcryingcryingcryingcrying.

RYAN. I don't know what to say, and even if I did, I wouldn't know how to say it. This is upsetting me in ways I wasn't prepared for, asdfghjkl; All the details and such, it's so sad, and I definitely noticed the line: "Almost like the first time all over again." I also noticed: "It's been almost too long." Ohhhhhhh my goodness.

Can I just play God for a moment and fix Brendon and Ryan all better and everyone's happy, the end? :D

This is fucking kill me, I can picture it all in my head. I can't.
I need more!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OMG THIS IS KILLING MEEEEE
*sob*

@ lady_enigma
Thank you so much!!! :D

This is such a sad story, but it's captivating. the emotions in it are great.

@ leeyahbvb97
OMG there's definitely a hurricane of crazy coming. Hold onto your emotions oh gosh I feel bad now. xP *hands you a box of tissues*

I'm try to have faith in ur last reply to my comment and not shead tears but god damnit that last line sent me over the edge and I just lost it seriously I can't explain why... But I full on ugly cried for 5 minutes.

@ WeWontTiptoeAbout
oh my gosh are you serious?? I must have magical powers or something, geez. o.o

Oh my god I cried. Literally. I never cry while reading :(

@ leeyahbvb97
oh gosh I'm sorry xP I guess the point of the story could be to make people cry, but I don't think tears should fall so soon. (pssst... more crazy stuff is coming)

U want me to cry. U must aim to make me cry. Seriously I'm breaking apart with Ryan and I'm not even joking

LOL OMG AT THE FIRS LINE I THOUGHT "Ryhawk"
You're perfect xD
*continues*
Can I have my tears back?

Why.
You turned something hot into a freakinf tear jerker.
Total girl-boner kill