You should get someone to read over your story before you post. The plot is good :) but simple things like using the wrong "are" or "our" etc make it a little hard to understand. But keep wiritng
I think you should read what you're writing or get someone to read it for you befor eyou lay it out. it's hard to understand to me but else it's a good story. I just wanna know what's happened in Ashley's past. and then please update soon. I love this story