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I just started using the comment swap feature and Mibba recommended your story. Awesome!

Besides that, I'm not really a band fic reader but I like this one in particular. I'm not to familiar with this band but after reading a few chapters, I was hooked! The details and the setting is really cool. Louise is a rad girl and I love her personality. Normally stories would have loud, crazy, and not a totally average girl. I think that's why I admire Louise! I can't wait and I'm super excited for the updates and you definitely get a thumbs up! I will be subscribing and recommending! Keep up the awesome work and I will be keeping up with updates! Love the story so far and overall nice job! ^▽^

I got here from comment swap.

So I'm not a big fan of this band, so I was a little apprehensive before reading it, but I have to say I quite liked it.

Your details are good, and your use of language better. I can easily relate to the characters as you've described them so well. I like your style or writing, it flows well and is just generally easy reading. I did notice a typo or two and some grammar errors, so maybe watch out for that. But over all, good work. :)

Amazing!

Well written :)

Well written :)

suspense is killing me :$

ooooh, keen to see what he has to talk to her about!!

@ xX.Roseanna.Xx thank you! yeah, i don't plan on ending it here. maybe's a couple more chapters!

Amazing. I could make all characters easily thanks to how detailed they are. Very easy to read, very unusual settings and situations but that's what makes it such a good story.

I wouldn't like for that to be the end of it (if it's already finished) maybe an epilogue or a sequel would be nice. maybe the growth of some other conflicts and situations for them to get to know each other better, like deep secrets or a messed up past of either one of them.

Overall, this is a great story and I enjoyed reading it very much.

Amazing. I could make all characters easily thanks to how detailed they are. Very easy to read, very unusual settings and situations but that's what makes it such a good story.

I wouldn't like for that to be the end of it (if it's already finished) maybe an epilogue or a sequel would be nice. overall, great story.

aw this is all reallu nicely written i literally love it

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Nicely written. I like the character. She's relatable and seems real, unlike many stories nowadays. Very descriptive details about the characters and the actions.
I do have to ask if this is about a drummer of a particular band I've never heard of, or just don't know the names that well. That was a bit perplexing to me. And there are a few typos I've noticed (but it happens to the best of us.)
Either way, good job so far. Continue the good work!

Amazing. I could make all characters easily thanks to how detailed they are. Very easy to read, very unusual settings and situations but that's what makes it such a good story.

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Honestly, I loved this. Really well written, every chapter. The whole thing flows really well,and every bit is great, from the bits at the beginning, to the sex scene in this final chapters, which I might say is done really well. A lot of people do sex-scenes really badly, either they shy away from it, or they over-indulge the reader, but yours is great, really well written.

Overall, really enjoyed. One question though: why is this down as a fanfiction? I assume, as there is no sign of a fanfiction now, that the band that dan is in is going to be a famous band? Personally, I would turn this into an original fiction. I think that generally speaking, people respond better to original, and this is definately good enough. Just a suggestion, obviously, it's your preference.

Still, really enjoyed, keep it up! xD

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I see this as nothing more than a band story. Though the summary has something that I have heard of before, I like the fact that the character is someone that I can relate with. As for the first chapter, there are a couple sentences and such which you can fix, but over all it's an okay-ish start. Good luck.

So far, love it! :D A great idea for a plot, Dan is awesome ^_^ Only thing I'd give for improvement would be that when you have a character shouting, not to use capitol letters but just emphasise the fact that they're shouting y'know? But to be honest it didn't bother me that much. :)

haha love it :)

love it

@ youmeat69 ily ty updating tonight i think

aw dani this was so good ahhhhh i can't wait for the next chapter okaY