Memories That Fade Like Photographs - Comments

  • KidsFromYesterday182

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    Update soon? Yah. Yah you should update
    August 26th, 2012 at 03:44am
  • forever_hustler

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    I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! it's amazing! i sorta love reading all the christmasey stuff in august lmao! & i really like the story line ca\use when you first move somewhere & people are really welcoming to you, you're bound to get close to them pretty fast & it's obvious that kaylie & alex have something, even if they got close fast i don't think it matters! please please update soon ♥♥
    August 26th, 2012 at 03:07am
  • alltimelowlover03

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    i've only just found this story, but i'm glad i did its really good, you do deserve more comments:) i hope alex and kaylie get together soon! :)
    August 26th, 2012 at 12:02am
  • so outrageous

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    I loved this chapter! At first it made me sad because she was alone on Christmas, but then all her friends came over and her and Alex were cuddling and awwww!
    They need to get together soon, by the way! Can't wait for the next chapter (:
    August 25th, 2012 at 11:54pm
  • Annabelle Graceton

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    Alrighty, so another comment swapper here. Not a huge All Time Low fan, but I've been reading some fanfics about them recently so I'm atleast familiar with who they all are. You got a good story started here. I read up to like chapter 3 or 4, can't remember which. Ummm I did notice a couple of errors so far. In the first chapter you forgot to say her dad when listing the people she moved with and in chapter 3/4 (whichever one I ended on) you said Kaylee's name instead of her sister's name at one point.
    You are a good writer, I'm just not really a fan of this story. I'm not a fan of swearing or sexual stuff so this isn't my cup of tea. I also struggled to believe that storyline a bit, because they became super close super fast... And then she's going to spend the night there? It just seems a little too fast for my tastes. Good luck with this story though :)
    August 25th, 2012 at 06:20am
  • Asmodeus;

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    I hate these types of stories, comment swap brought me here, I only read the first chapter and I was impressed but I can't read it. I'm not a fan. You're an excellent writer though, I love the plot and I love both of the characters they are very well written out in my opinion. Love the simple layout as well, sorry I couldn't have been anymore help, but blame comment swap on this :-( just stating, I don't have anything against your writing its just the band but I will recommend this to my friends that like this kind of stories.

    SJ
    August 24th, 2012 at 05:59pm
  • l0stinNeverland

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    OHMYGOD WHY ARE THEY NOT TOGETHER YET, they are so adorable that they just need to be together! Your such a good writer, your chapters are a great length and the theme is so simple and pretty!
    Keep writing and good luck
    August 23rd, 2012 at 02:47pm
  • forever_hustler

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    omg please don't stop posting, i'd die ! this chapter was really good! it was just really cute & i like it a lot! but seriously sometime needs to happen between alex & kaylie sooon (: update soon ♥
    August 19th, 2012 at 11:04pm
  • ChaelaNicoleEPIC

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    I don't ever comment on stories, but I just wanted to let you know that I think this is really good and you're a very good writer. xoxox.
    August 19th, 2012 at 10:19pm
  • earthtocarrigan

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    So cute! I want her and Alex to get together already omfg how cute would that be just in time for christmas!! amaaazing chapter x
    August 19th, 2012 at 08:53pm
  • KidsFromYesterday182

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    Hey so um..... ALEX AND HER NEED TO GET TOGETHER ALREADY! Yah okay that's all :]
    August 19th, 2012 at 08:29pm
  • so outrageous

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    Loved this chapter (: I'm in a very festive mood now haha. Can't wait for the next update!
    August 19th, 2012 at 07:59pm
  • AllyIsDumb

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    This seems so real omFG
    August 15th, 2012 at 03:53pm
  • forever_hustler

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    awwwhhhh ! i feel so bad for kaylie ! but she really needs to tell alex how, she feels & alex needs to know that she didn't just say it because he did! can't wait to read the next chapter! update soon ♥
    August 15th, 2012 at 08:37am
  • Tragic_Ending

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    awwwww. this is such a cute story. I love it so much. <3 update soon.
    August 9th, 2012 at 11:56pm
  • forever_hustler

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    AWH AWH AWH AWH . reallllyy good (: alex is adorable too, they're super cute together ! update soon ♥
    August 9th, 2012 at 01:23am
  • amour maigre

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    This is sooooooo cute!!!!
    August 5th, 2012 at 08:06am
  • Kaysmiff93

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    I Love this(: Can't wait for you to update!!!:D
    August 5th, 2012 at 03:25am
  • forever_hustler

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    YES OMG . I really like the cute little texts between alex & kaylie ! Can't wait to see what happens up until the dance! update soon ♥
    August 3rd, 2012 at 03:18am
  • Pretend.

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    Heaps good! (Y)
    August 3rd, 2012 at 01:23am