I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! it's amazing! i sorta love reading all the christmasey stuff in august lmao! & i really like the story line ca\use when you first move somewhere & people are really welcoming to you, you're bound to get close to them pretty fast & it's obvious that kaylie & alex have something, even if they got close fast i don't think it matters! please please update soon ♥♥
I loved this chapter! At first it made me sad because she was alone on Christmas, but then all her friends came over and her and Alex were cuddling and awwww! They need to get together soon, by the way! Can't wait for the next chapter (:
Alrighty, so another comment swapper here. Not a huge All Time Low fan, but I've been reading some fanfics about them recently so I'm atleast familiar with who they all are. You got a good story started here. I read up to like chapter 3 or 4, can't remember which. Ummm I did notice a couple of errors so far. In the first chapter you forgot to say her dad when listing the people she moved with and in chapter 3/4 (whichever one I ended on) you said Kaylee's name instead of her sister's name at one point. You are a good writer, I'm just not really a fan of this story. I'm not a fan of swearing or sexual stuff so this isn't my cup of tea. I also struggled to believe that storyline a bit, because they became super close super fast... And then she's going to spend the night there? It just seems a little too fast for my tastes. Good luck with this story though :)
I hate these types of stories, comment swap brought me here, I only read the first chapter and I was impressed but I can't read it. I'm not a fan. You're an excellent writer though, I love the plot and I love both of the characters they are very well written out in my opinion. Love the simple layout as well, sorry I couldn't have been anymore help, but blame comment swap on this :-( just stating, I don't have anything against your writing its just the band but I will recommend this to my friends that like this kind of stories.
OHMYGOD WHY ARE THEY NOT TOGETHER YET, they are so adorable that they just need to be together! Your such a good writer, your chapters are a great length and the theme is so simple and pretty! Keep writing and good luck
omg please don't stop posting, i'd die ! this chapter was really good! it was just really cute & i like it a lot! but seriously sometime needs to happen between alex & kaylie sooon (: update soon ♥
awwwhhhh ! i feel so bad for kaylie ! but she really needs to tell alex how, she feels & alex needs to know that she didn't just say it because he did! can't wait to read the next chapter! update soon ♥