Hidden Within Her - Comments

Exactly!! Thank you for understanding! =D Even though I feel as if I did a crappy job of explaining it. xD

Oh. I understand about the layout. And I think I know what you're saying. You want more of an ambiguous feeling so that readers can kind of play it out in their own way. I like that

Sorry about the print, but it's not a layout I made, it's one of the public ones. Thank you for the suggestion! I'll try to add in some more descriptive words but I'm really going for that vague, in the fog type story. Something that people can hopefully run with and use their imagination. Not sure if that's the best way to describe it. .

This story is really good so far. I like the layout, though the large print is a little hard to read. Your grammar and spelling are both very good, though I think using more descriptive words would make the story just a little better. I'll keep on reading. -A