They Say You've Been Pleading - Comments

Hello again! Okay so I found this story earlier today and decided to read it while taking a break while doing my MUN work, guess what? It was 1:30am and I was in tears after finishing this story before rushing off the read the squeal. Least to say, no work has been done thus far. This story honestly had me hooked right off the bat, I loved how flirty and cocky Gerard was - I don't know there's something attractive about 'bad boy' types to me - but loved him even more (somehow) when he was vulnerable towards Alice. I was hoping for a happily ever after ending but the ending of this was simply perfect, in a heart breaking way. I was left in tears imagining the whole scene playing out and hoped for the best in their future together (but I'm so damn happy that there's a sequel!!!) and hoped that Gerard would visit Alice soon. The writing style and over all story line was utterly amazing to be honest. From the realism you gave your characters I honestly felt like I was watching someone's life play out right in front of me and despite how much of a jerk he had been I could see the inner struggle Gerard felt about being with Alice (which became clearer in the sequel and pulled at my heart strings to the point I felt like crying all over again). I was laughing right from the beginning, such as when Ray told Alice how they Way brothers were always so silly. But my favorite part would have definitely had to have been when Gerard stole her underwear, imagining Alice is face was priceless! And I felt my face heat up when he gave it back to her and made the comment of hearing everything she did. I couldn't help but mouth "Oh shiiiittt!!!!". Your writing is honestly amazing and I have subscribed to other stories of yours (which I will be reading and commenting on this weekend) and really look forward to reading them!! All I have left to say is that this is definitely one of my favorite Gerard Way stories. I look forward to seeing what happens next in the sequel!! xxx

@ bluegreensphere
Thank you :)

"There was a knock at the door, so damn soft you could almost hear his apology through it, but I refused to open it."
Love that line. I admire your talent! Riveting stuff.

The ending was cute :) Its been a while since I read a good MCR fic. Its so hard to find one that doesn't involve slash lol. Anyway, I really liked this and I can't wait until you post the first chapter on the sequel. I'll be keeping my eyes open for the notification that you started the next one :)

awwww. That was adorable. :3 Can't wait for the sequel!

@ EdWiN.isamonster Perhaps ;)

So cute :3 I wonder if that one girl, I forgot her name, the evil one! Will she be making a return in the sequel? :)

Yayy :) It sounds like it's really close to being over D: Do you think you're going to write a sequel?? :D I hope so!

Um. Umm. UMMM. It's almost been a monthhhh :'(

I can't wait for the next chapter :) absolutly love this story <3

I can't wait for the next chapter :) absolutly love this story <3

I love this more than words can say

You MUST write a sequel D: I love this story so much. I'm going to be sad when it's over, heh :'(

HAHA oh man, things just keep getting worse for her. i can't even imagine what i would do if i were in her shoes and had my journal read.

the 'gerald bay' thing totally made me snort.

<3 the update!

Loooooved it. Update again. Now? Please? Heh :)

Love this :) update soon!

Just read all of what you've wrote and OH MY GOD, please update this amazingness, I am seriously madly in love with this story!

Just started reading this (I'm on chapter six at the moment) and it is so amazingly good that it literally gives me tingles. You are a super talented writer you have made me fall in love with this story <3 ah-mazing!

hahahahaha, poor alice. poor, poor alice.

HAHAHAHAHA I found that hilarious. I love this. So much, & wait did he take ten back afterwards & jack off with them? Or did he give them back & not do that with them? But either way it was super hilarious & I'm looking forward to another update!