Hi, I was sent over from the comment swap and here's my comment:
I like it. I like how its not the religious girl with the not-so religious boy, but vice versa. Its well written and I like the detail you've given so far. The only problem I have is that link you put for a picture of Vince, there's a character's section it could go in, and I don't think it needs to be in the story. Other than that little thing everything else seems really awesome. I like where this story is going and I'm gonna subscribe to it. Keep writing. :]
Awe. Well I'm sure whatever you would write it'd be great!