So I am new to your stories, So there's a brownie point for me. I like where this is going. I liked the e-mails at the beginning because it just throws you in but then it takes a different turn right after which had me lost. I just sat and looked at the paragraph for a few minutes trying to figure out what was going on. I love it and will be back for sure. -S
Wha??? Randomhero1219 aaannnddd Becka? This is going to be the shiz. Js. Can't wait to read more. Like, a whole lot more. K? Ok.(: Now, I'm completely diggin the friendship dynamic here...but...maybe...just a suggestion...instead of having the translations at the end and a whole bunch of stuff you can't read in the middle...maybe putting the foreign language and them in parenthesis the English translation? Just a thought! But still fabulous anyways!
it's premise was interesting and made me want more :/