I Wish - Comments

Hahaa absolutely loving this!:D But I'd suggest a layout change! It really hurts my eyes!:o Sorry! But seriously, great story!

Hahaa absolutely loving this!:D But I'd suggest a layout change! It really hurts my eyes!:o Sorry! But seriously, great story!

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I'd like to start by saying that the layout really
Hurts my eyes.
Like...the purple radius pop out around the letters
Made it hard for me to read
But I like your start and details
You seem to have a great sense of imagery
And I really have pet peeves when it comes down
To authors writing here but you are totally great
Keep it up!

This is great!

Super Good keep at it!

Please update again soon! I love this story!

Thank you comment swap aha. I've only read the first chapter but Inthought it wad kinda cute. I get how she (still can't remember her name...Finna?) feels with wanting Niall to leave sooner. I bet this will turn out to be such a cute and sweet and adorable little fanfic :)

I really want to see where this is going' keep writing.

This story is adorable! Update soon?

i love it so far, a bit shocked about the time lapse moments, but wutevers!! i like it, so please update again soon!!

Comment Swap! So, I'm not the biggest One Direction fan. Not a hater, they're really funny guys, but I'm just not their biggest fan, you know? Anyway, I actually like this a lot. I think the details are great and the plot is really nice. The story as a whole just flows. Keep it up. :)

Comment Swap! So, I'm not the biggest One Direction fan. Not a hater, they're really funny guys, but I'm just not their biggest fan, you know? Anyway, I actually like this a lot. I think the details are great and the plot is really nice. The story as a whole just flows. Keep it up. :)

i like it :)

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Got this through comment swap:) it's very well written and I really do like 1D so it was easy for me to understand and follow, I would've liked for the time lapse's to have been longer, cause they were awesome!! Please update soon!:) great job Hun! Subscribed!<3

Got this through comment swap:) it's very well written and I really do like 1D so it was easy for me to understand and follow, I would've liked for the time lapse's to have been longer, cause they were awesome!! Please update soon!:) great job Hun! Subscribed!<3

{Comment Swap!}So I have tooken your comment virginity!!! Haha okay so it's okay so far I'm not really into 1D sorry! But it sounds pretty good and I'm glad you have helped me how to say the names :D anyways good luck and other than a few details you are okay!!!