Hard Habit to Break - Comments

I miss this way too much :(

@carolskarsgard because she is young and dumb. It's the beginning of her downward spiral.

How come she's dropping everything??

It was nice to see both sides of them in the past two chapters :) I cannot wait for more :)

Don't leave me hanging! I missed Elias the chapter though

I just love this way too much!

Thanks guys! I'll try and keep the updates going as quickly as possible.

This is great! I absolutely love the update :)

I.AM.IN.LOVE!!!!
I found the perfect story to read, and for that I am forever thankful!
Please update! I am dying in here.

xxx

This story was recommended to me and I am so freaking glad it was. I already love this story. I can not wait to read more of it. Please don't hesitate to update ;)
-Gem

The one-sentence summary is what pulled me in. It was absolutely intriguing.
The story so far is quite excellent, if I might say.

I found this story looking through the original fiction and let me just say, I'm white happy that I did.

The one-sentence summary is what pulled me in. It was absolutely intriguing.
The story so far is quite excellent, if I might say.

I found this story looking through the original fiction and let me just say, I'm white happy that I did.

Oh hey there, I was sent here from Comment Swap, and to be honest I'm pleasantly surprised - this is an excellent story! There are dozens of tiny details in the story I could commend you on, but what really captures my attention is the style on which this is written. Something about this is so unique and intriguing and I love it!

This is a cool style of narrative, much more interesting than the usual "Then I did this, then I did that" we see in most stories. Also the first few paragraphs are intriguing when we see the contrast with how it all started. Makes me really want to see where it all went wrong... or right ;)
I love reading about characters who are first introduced to drugs because drugs are such a huge part of my social life and I can really identify with it. nostalgic I believe is the word...

Sorry for the writing mistakes. It's my f*cking phone's and while typing quickly I did them. When I went to re-read what I wrote for fixing my typos, I sent it by mistake. Sowwy :)

It would be great if your wrote a bit more than just ''I used to do this for the thrill'' on summary.

I liked the first chapter. It pulled me right in and I wanna read and learn more. It's really interesting and it made me curious about your main character.

I don't agree with the negative comment the user below wrote. You can use whatever character you like. Using a character's photograph doesn't mean it's a fan fiction story when you stated it's original fiction. It means the character you have portrait in your mind looks like him.

Keep up the great work and share your imagination with me and the rest of your fans. :)

It would be great if your wrote a bit more than just ''I used to do this for the thrill'' on summary. I liked the first chaptered. It pulled me right in and I wanna read and learn more. It's really interesting and it made me cutious about your main character. I don't agree with the negative comment the user below wrote. You can use whatever character you like. Using a character;s ohotograph doens't mean it's a fan fiction story when you stated it's original fiction. It means the character you have portrait in your mind looks like him.

Keep up the great work and share your imagination with me and the rest of your fans. :)

Ok, my only "negative" comment would have to be about the layout. I hate opening stories and seeing that the person they're basing their character off of (I'm assuming he's Elias) is a well known actor/actress/band member. This is original fiction, and the layout makes it seem like fanfiction. I entered this thinking "shit... This is going to be a love triangle fanfic..".
Thankfully it wasn't. I absolutely loved the description... I love reading stories about straight and narrows that go over to the dark side. I can see Handley kind of becoming like Effy... Good girl by day, party girl by night. I can already tell this is going to be a well written story, by the description of her in the mirror and the part of the alabaster curtains. I can't wait to read about when she starts heading down the "dark" path!

aw, what a great way to begin! your writing honestly reminds me of mine. kind of choppy, yet at the same time it has a beautiful flow to it. like an actual person's thoughts, which is why i think people relate to this type of writing and really get into it so much. i definitely agree with the comment below me. maybe a little more description on things that you don't really notice that they need attention. then again, this is through Hadley's point of view and maybe she's not interested or aware of the smell of the pancakes, look of the house, or description of her parent's looks. then again, i don't think it'd hurt to add it in anyways. it's something i think i need to work on in my writing as well. anyways, though, looking past the grammar and technicality, the story itself i find interesting. i like the plot and i definitely want to know more! keep up the good work and update soon.

Wonderful start. I'm very interested to see how she turned from a sweet, innocent girl to a druggie. I'm sure you'll present it beautifully. You've done great with visual descriptions of your main character, but I was really looking for a little more description to your other characters as well as to the house. So far I really don't have an understanding of what the house looks like. Is it clean or messy? Can you hear the outside world at all? What do the pancakes smell like? Add a little more depth to the actions in your story, and I'm sure you'll do great. ^_^ keep up the good work