OH. MY. GOD. THIS GAVE ME THE CHILLS. IT'S LIKE RE-VISITING SILENT HILL OR SOMETHING.
I had to google some stuff on the Alice game as I'm completely lost, but I have heard of the game before (my hubby's a hardcore gamer). I didn't read 'Alice In Wonderland' and I only know the basic surface of the story.
I've recommended and will be adding your story to my blog post about AU fics. This story really got me mind-fucked and I think I'm going to devour the second installment as I'm a big fan of twisted, dark 1D stories. And since this time around, it involves Louis as the main character so I'll definitely be at the edge of my seat and see where the rabbit hole goes to next.
I want to compliment you on your wonderful writing and I am glad you're back. Please feed us with your twisted story-telling!
In a way, this is why I hated fairytales. They gave me the creeps.
You are amazing. This was such a great story! It had the perfect amount of information with just enough missing to keep the readers guessing. I absolutely adore how you incoperated all the different versions of Alice from various media(movies, books, etc.) and how it all came together. The ending was a definate shock with a little bit of reality whiplash and I'm left wondering how the sequel will tie in, as well as if anyone other than Zayn 'remembers' what happened. Thank you so much for writing such an amazing story. I'll be reccomending and eagerly awaiting the sequel.
That was so good! at the end i was like what??? A great story. Made me kind of confused and crazy but i really enjoyed it :D Such an amazing ending, and storyline.
This is definitely going into my recommendation blog! With that ending, you left me literally saying aloud, "What the bloody hell was that?" and I couldn't be happier to say it. I truly love these twisted stories, hut yours was bunk far the best! I love the ending, personally, because it makes you wonder if Zayn was just mad after all! I'm going to go and read your other masterpieces now!
You said you didn't know why people liked this one so much, but I think I know. Everybody likes a good mystery, and everybody likes a story to have a good twist. And let's face it, who doesn't like Alice in Wonderland? I love it - and that's why I started reading this and didn't stop, not even to comment.
As I said, I love Alice in Wonderland. And I've wanted to play Alice: Madness Returns ever since I found out about it, but whenever I saw it in stores it was always $100! So, waiting for the price to come down. Or maybe I should look on eBay...
Regardless, I think this just became one of my favourite stories. So recommending this! It was very well done and kept me guessing until the end, though I did guess that Michelle was the Doll Maker. XD
Just...wow. I wish I'd thought to write something like this. It was brilliant!
What. Is. This. Fuckery. Holy shit. This was such an amazing story I loved it to death but my brain is actually having a fit. Holy fucking mother of a potato. This is some fucked up shit. But your brilliant. Thank you for this, hahaha:)
OMFG this was the most confusing, most crazy, story I have ever read on mibba. That I have ever read period. I LOVE IT... I also love the song Her Name Is Alice. By Shinedown. Shinedown is one of my favorite bands. Well their in my top 10. Number 2. Avenged is my 1st. . This story takes Alice in wonderland to a whole new level. I swear it does. I love the movies also. I've got the hidden object game and beat it.
Sorry for the psycho babble. Holy shit. Sorry I just really liked it.
Oh my fucken god. My brain is dead after reading that I just..gjdisogndfohb. I'm just so lost O.o Dear God Zayn don't meet her >.< Amazing story! Even though my mind if fucked now.
LOOOOOL. So you mean..everything was JUST A DREAM, AND..they're literally meeting ALICE IN REAL LIFE? As Minnesota518 said, I can't wait for you to become a famous author so I can buy all your books! haha :D
WUT. WUTWUTWUTWUTWUT. You have a genius running your mind. I can't even comprehend anything because my mind is completely blown away. OH MY GOODNESS LET ME LOVE YOU. I'm crying on the inside of my face right now. Like my heart is. Just. What. I can't wait until you're a famous author so I can buy all your books and give you money for your talent and tell people that I knew you before you were famous and I love you and just please know that I seriously will always be here to comment on your writing because you're amazing.