I'm interested to see where this is going because the summary said that the mother died, but right now it appears s though its being told from the mother's perspective so I'm interesting in seeing if there will be a point of view switch. The only thing I noticed is that they said "baby" or "baby girl" a lot. It seemed like every time either of them spoke, one of those was coming out of their mouths. I know that is sometimes how you talk to kids, but every having it in every sentence seemed a bit much. Other than that, this is good so far!
October 20th, 2012 at 06:34am