Savages - Comments

So yeah. I'm crying. This is an amazing story. I love you.

That makes me so upset.. Cause she's actually dead.. shit..

i'm packing my feelings into a small cooler and shipping them to your house, 'cause these are doing nothing but hurting me. like Harry said, she was supposed to be indestructible, but it didn't occur to me that something could in fact destroy her- herself.

it's gonna be so hard to see this story go. i've been reading from early on (like chapter 3 or 4? maybe before, can't recall), and every update has provided a new thrilling and engaging addition to this unique anthology of action, sci-fi, and mild romance. you showed us a character who was as basic as a human being could be, and allowed her to be molded by the thoughts and feelings of others until she could start projecting her own. Elle grew exponentially from installment to mind-boggling installment, and in her development, the very people who crafted her emotional side grew as well. but in the crash course of shaping of her feelings, she became overwhelmed easily, and that's why i really like her- in those moments when the rage became too much and she essentially let her body run on its own, she couldn't have been more human. in the end, Elle was supposed to be a weapon, a tool, only used to protect, but the comfort she found in Harry, Meghan, the boys, and Paul was a sign that she too could've used some protection.

a tear just fell down my cheek. this hurts. you wrote brilliantly, the story was vivid and had a better plot than most movies currently being released in hollywood. even with the tragic ending, i don't regret a second of reading. thank you for penning this.

i might be ok later, but right now,


xoxo

Oh god. No I was not emotionally really for Elle to die. Oh god it was amazing. I thought she would live but apparently not oh god. Update soon!!

OH MY GOD this is so great wow it's so original and exciting and wow wow wow good job i applaud you

Oh my goodness, I can't even put into words how terrific this story was.. but i'm going to try anyways..
the detail you put in this was so amazing, I have a vivid imagination and usually stories on here lack the details that seem unimportant so I kinda make things up in my mind as I read, but that wasn't even necessary at all when I was reading this and that is just absolutely amazing, when I was reading the last chapter I literally zoned out and saw it all play out in my head to the point that when I came back to reality I scared myself because I forgot that I wasn't watching a movie or something.
I also found myself tearing up which is really hard to get me to do.
This was just.. ugh, the definition of perfection.
And I absolutely hate that Elle died. :'(
You're a fantastic writer though, and I'm going to your page right now to see if you have anymore stories because if they're half as good as this one was I will definitely be subscribing and recommending.

:( so sad that she died. but god that was an amazing story. please please please write another.

Omfg, this is like the absolute BEST story I've ever read. I was so upset when I realized I read through it all already, and even more when I read the next chapter is going to be the final one, :( but I can't wait!! Oh, and thank you for creating the best fan-fiction I've ever read, lol. :D

Omg. Its so close to the end already...whaaatt??!!!??

OH MY GOD I'M CONVULSING THIS IS EXCELLENT IF YOU END IT WRITE A SEQUEL PLEASE OH PLEAAAASE.

this is the part where i lay on the floor and cry like the whale baby i am. THEY ADMITTED IT, THEY SAID IT, AND I CAN DIE HAPPY


so wait, i'm a little confused. were there still audience members in the building when it collapsed? were they evacuated in the three minutes too? i know there were a lot of hostages, but i was trying to roughly estimate just how many. plus there something about "injured" hostages? basically, did any innocents die? i'm just a little lost on that part, but other than that, this was a brilliant chapter as always :)

that. was. perfect!
ahhhh so happy with this chapter!!!
love this story!
please update soon!!! :D

I'm sobbing. This is too damn perfect and they are freaking adorable and i love it and they're going to do the bang bang like meghan and niall did and it will be grand and yes.

you called me a peach. i'm gonna die because of how abnormally sweet you are <3.
your depiction of fight scenes are PERFECTION (well, can they really be defined as fights, seeing as Elle just kinda walks in and whoops ass like the rest of us breath air?), and the detail you put into your writing makes me jealous. i feel comforted knowing that the clone can't do the shit the real Number 37 can (right? RIGHT???), 'cause with all the guards as well, that'd be one uneven-ass fight... 'cause Elle would STILL beat. the. shit. outta. all. of. them.
uuuugggghhhh, i'm impatient, but it'll be worth the wait, i know it

and uhhh, bonus liam gif because i was laughing way too hard at it

ELLE IS SUPERHUMAN AND HER AND HARRY ARE GONNA DO THE BANG BANG ONCE SHE SAVES ALL OF THEM✌

i'm extremely stoked for the next chapter.
really confused as to who got shot though.
update soon! xx

gahh, i'm super excited for the next chapter.
i'm sure it'll be as fantastic as the rest of the story!
update soon, or else i might die of anticipation. ♥

Niall <3
Teehee c:
HE'S ALL MINE!
Mwuahahahaha!
Okay Elle, lets get this together, you're going to swoop in at just the right time and beat this bitch senseless. And Niall will hold my earrings while I pull her weave out and I shove my foot in her ass for ever trying to pretend to be Elle.
Damn.
Just let me at her, I'll take her with my bare hands!
Okay, maybe I'll let Elle do it...I mean that is her job...and I just painted my nails, so...
Oh girl, those damn cliff hangers.
You're going to have to update soon so that I know what happens, you know that right?
Okay good :)
Love you beautiful! <3
Always your S.S. ,
-Meghan Xx

FUCKING IMPOSTER.
Get rid of her, get rid of her NOW.
I seriously hope Elle gets there in time. If she doesn't I might cry.

so i just read this whole story, good golly what can i say? this is absolutely perfect. the detail you put it in is amazing, usually when i read stories i get bored when people aren't talking but the way you describe everything is incredible, i can really picture everything you're talking about in my head. it's fantastic. I honestly cannot wait to see how this story plays out, it's so interesting. I'm curious to see what happens. you're a phenomenal writer. anyways update soon please! ♥