All The Small Things - Comments

Aww. Sorry I wasn't able to review as soon as this chapter came out.. (I read it like 15 minutes after you posted it.) But I was on my phone and I still havent figured out how to comment that way.

So good, can't wait for more.
I hate being mad at Vinny ;(

Aside from the released songs So long Soldier... eaisily

This was so good! Vinny is pissing ME off though, can't wait to see what his deal is!

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Keyboard smash because I had so many good feelings about this chapter! It's just so adorable and all good things. I'm upset that Vinny was upset though! I mean... maybe he understands that Matt has a great (but difficult) job that could be hard on them once she gets farther along/actually has the baby. He better get over it soon though, because I'm SO excited for this!!

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Keyboard smash because I had so many good feelings about this chapter! It's just so adorable and all good things. I'm upset that Vinny was upset though! I mean... maybe he understands that Matt has a great (but difficult) job that could be hard on them once she gets farther along/actually has the baby. He better get over it soon though, because I'm SO excited for this!!

SO I'M NOT EVEN DONE READING THE CHAPTER YET BUT AW. "Ok babe, but I don’t want you to hesitate to tell me to come home. You’re more important than this job. I’d give it all up for you. Please know that." THAT MADE ME CRY OKAY.

alksjdfhasd SHES PREGNANT. YES. I KNEW IT. I KNEW IT. Aw man, I can't even explain the feelings I get from this story, and in particular what I felt with this chapter.

I'll be honest: I did tear up during the part where Tess was thinking back to her dad.. because the first anniversary of my dad's passing just happened last week. So I understand that pain, I could really feel it when I read that part.

Great job lady! Can't wait for more. xo

Oh wow, I already told you about the tenses, I'm sorry! Another thing though, watch out for run on sentences and repeating words. Like that one sentence that went something like "they had just finished eating a nice dinner next to the beach and were now walking on the beach." Try replacing one of the beaches with the word ocean or sea, it flows a little better. I suppose I should shut up now. Keep writing!

I wish Matt would come home from tour so him and Tessa could be all cute together, *sigh* oh well. I loved this update, just be mindful of which tense you use because I've noticed that you tend to switch a lot.

Update soon!! :)

This was so sweet and I love Matt and Tessa. The only thing I noticed was that you tend to shift tenses when you're writing. Just work on that because otherwise I'm loving this story! Update please :)

Awww, I absolutely love everything that is Matt and Tessa and now they're engaged and I have lots of feels for them! Yay for this story. Can't wait for more<33

WHAT. HOW COULD YOU GIVE ME ALL THAT DRAMA AND THEN GO BACK IN TIME?! Sigh. I'm so excited for what happens next! I have a few guesses as to what happened with Tessa in that earlier chapter, but I'll keep my mouth shut for now!

P.S. YAY MATT+TESSA OTP IS BACK.

ARRRRR I only just noticed you had been updating :D I think I may have burst a vein with how exited I got .... Omg what the hell it was all dramatic and boom and then you where all like yes bitches I have you in my power now I give you an inticing storyline and make you wait to find out whats going on! Woman as long as you update soon i'll follow you anywhere :D

UPDATE PLEASE :LKSFJ <3

Ok so this was annoying. You throw a load of drama at me on the first chapter and then we go back in fucking time... I forgive you thou because your an amazing writer and I love Flyzik.

What's going to happen with Tessa and Flyzik, I hope nothing bad. There such a cute couple.

Please update soon for me. I don't think I can wait long.

Yay your back. I want to know so bad what's wrong with her... is she pregnant and having a miscarage or something?.

Please update so I can know what's going on.

WHAT IS GOING ON WITH HER. OH MY GOD. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I'm actually, really freaking out right now! :O

I'm so excited already, oh my gosh