Have You Ever Danced - Comments

updates please cause i'd love to see where this goes (:

Comment swapper here :) So I can't put my finger on it, but this story just doesn't feel completely right to me. I don't know why, it's well written and pretty organized but I just can't bring myself to subscribe. Sorry :/

This is a really great story.
I don't know the characters or anything, but in time, this story will become a great masterpiece.
It's very well written as far as I've read and there were no obvious mistakes/grammatical errors.

Well done, keep up the good work.

I'm loving this story alot :) I definitely loved your Miss May I reference <3
I can't wait for mote updates!

updatee soon! :)

Sent here by the comment swap (:

Honestly, there is a lot that could be done. You need to slow things down a little bit, going into the story with Jessica already knowing everybody kind of takes the fun out of it. Rightfully, you should have gone into it with her knowing nobody. Then you would've been able to have the fun of developing everybody's relationships. Otherwise, not bad. You're a pretty good writer, but there's things you definately need to work on. Keep trying! I know you can do it (:

Awesome chapter! Update soon! :)

first one to comment! haha. Great chapter, I can't wait to read more xD.