I Missed You - Comments

idk what to even write its so perfect and great and lovely <3

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I Love this idea, it's very well written and flows perfectly right down to the last word.

Will you be continuing this or leaving it as a one-shot?

The emotion in the story is very well written and unlike what the other comments said it was confusing I really understood every word.

Well done :)

I was a bit wary of this after reading the comments, but I didn't find it as confusing as I was expecting. I had an idea that Josh would be the reason for her upset so it all seemed to fit together in my mind.

You really delved into the emotions and I love that in a story. And I love the idea of her having her own place as it were, where she goes to be alone.

All in all a very beautiful emotional story :)
Jen xx

I was fairly confused the entire time I read this. Also, in the first sentence of the chapter you say 'I'd been sat here for a long time.' is it supposed to be written like that, or did you mean to put 'sitting'.
All in all, I liked it a lot even though it was confusing. Subscribed.

Comment swap led me to this very very very very nice story. If I had to give any constructive criticism to you, however, it would be that the plot was a bit confusing. I understood it, but not completely. It was a bit difficult for me to grasp, but it smoothed itself out towards the ending. She cried because the song reminded her of josh, I am assuming? Keep on going with this, you can go many many many many many many many different ways with this story. I love it, although the plot could definitely be more explicit. You could use a bit more explaining and detailing to your strengths.

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So I thought that your story is really good. Well written and organized, also your characters are well described something that I can’t do with mine. I always have trouble on this. Keep up the great writing and also if you have any writing tips I would appreciate it.

This is a great start :) x