My Baby, My Darling. - Comments

  • lipslam

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    I just started reading this about twelve hours ago, and via some late-night and on-the-go reading, I've already gotten myself all caught up. I've honestly whipped out my phone at several different crosswalks today because I'm too anxious to see what's next to wait until I can sit down for a minute and read haha. Safe to say I'm loving this tale. :)

    Only complaint would be about the number of times somebody "licks over their lips." Maybe your characters all have really chapped lips and no lip balm, but, not gonna lie, it's kinda grossing me out.

    Lip-licking or not, though, I'm looking forward to the next installment. The anticipation is wearing me down!
    December 2nd, 2013 at 08:05am
  • freetoflyyyy

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    @ andrea.howls
    Aw thank you. I'm glad this story came back too. It's nice to see some people on team Travis, I didn't think there were any.
    December 1st, 2013 at 03:14am
  • andrea.howls

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    Don't care that Travis was a jerk to Dex. I still love Travis.

    On a side note (which probably should have been the main note) I'm so happy this story came back :)
    November 30th, 2013 at 09:51pm
  • Ariananina;

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    I'm so in love with this last chapter! Great job, can't wait for the next update :)
    November 14th, 2013 at 03:03am
  • squidgyyo

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    Oh my god I love this story. I'm so torn between Travis and Dexter I like Travis bc he's sweet and awesome, then there's Dexter who is always sweet and awesome, they both truly care for her.
    I can't wait for more update soon.
    November 13th, 2013 at 11:02am
  • innumerae

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    I'm so Team Travis, it hurts.
    November 5th, 2013 at 04:51am
  • spazz

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    These updates are making me so happy. They're so perfect.
    November 4th, 2013 at 07:43pm
  • spazz

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    These updates are making me so happy. They're so perfect.
    November 4th, 2013 at 07:43pm
  • CatSizzle

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    Loveeeee itttt
    November 4th, 2013 at 04:26am
  • Ariananina;

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    I've waited for this for so long!! Hope you update slobs :)
    November 3rd, 2013 at 06:45pm
  • Pokevonne

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    Was so shocked to see an update haha! Welcome back :) Good chapter, but I just need some Dex and Chels in my life!
    October 16th, 2013 at 10:28pm
  • freetoflyyyy

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    @ Ariananina;
    Thank you so much!
    July 24th, 2013 at 08:42am
  • Ariananina;

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    Love this story, I really hope you update soon, you write wonderfully (:
    July 24th, 2013 at 08:28am
  • random.ninja

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    I just cried a little....that was an amazing chapter
    March 28th, 2013 at 12:53am
  • freetoflyyyy

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    @ andrea.howls
    Seriously. Thank you so much for that. I was so worried that everyone would hate that chapter. Like, I legitimately hated it that much. I can breathe now.
    March 27th, 2013 at 03:48am
  • andrea.howls

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    Omgosh. That last chapter was, in my opinion even better than the one when Dex first showed up. I can't wait for the next one in which Travis and her have a talk.
    March 27th, 2013 at 03:34am
  • Pokevonne

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    Dexter I love you!! No but seriously. Chels needs to sober up and talk things out with him or else... yeah
    March 8th, 2013 at 05:02pm
  • SugarCoatedPoison

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    I share your infatuation! I really want Delsea to work out!!! His jealousy was super cute!!! AHHH you mess with my feels woman!
    March 8th, 2013 at 04:20am
  • this_heart_has_bled

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    this is such an amazing story. please update
    March 7th, 2013 at 10:36am
  • girlygirl.m

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    can't wait till the new chapter. i love this story.
    February 28th, 2013 at 07:56pm