Sadness Is a Blessing - Comments

I like the theme and I hope it works out. From what I've read so far I wish you have gone into more about her and her mother's relationship. MadamNixie is right capturing the mind of a addict is tough but I believe you will give us a great look into Ellie's head and her life. Can't wait to read more

From what little I have read of your book I believe you are doing a good job.:) The theme you are going with is probably going to be a bit difficult after a while though because capturing the mind of a addict can be hard at times. I look forward to seeing how you portray this book. You eased into it rather well starting off with a bit of formalities with your character which I enjoyed, and the cover is perfect! You could use a bit more of description in the beginning about her boyfriend and her, maybe go farther into the history between them, like more of a scene because that would add more of a hook to your story to draw others in. Other than that it was superb:)

Thank you sooo much for critiquing, I really need that. Also, I did realize that the font size is way too big, but I couldn't figure out how to make it small enough because, it was changing up different things on the layout. I think I did figure it out & made it a little smaller. I'll also edit my summary and chapters to see how that looks. Again thank you so much! :D

A short summary would be helpful, you better do one. The picture you used pulls me in and that's a great thing. No need for the huge writing type.
What you used for chapter one would be better as the summary, I think. Chapter two was a nice start. I like the theme you use in writing this story so I will subscribe. Keep on writing and share your imagination with me and your fans. :)