Taking Back That Which Is Mine - Comments

I agree that the missing heart was a really good idea to put into the story, and that I can't wait to see how the story develops. Something that I really liked though was Aria's thoughts and the way she spoke to other people. It was quite subtle, but the way she spoke and thought made it obvious that she wasn't the same as all the other people around her. I'm not sure what it was, but I thought that was really clever, so well done :)

I like this :) it's an intriguing premise, and it kind of reminds me of a short story Takaya Natsuki put in her 'Fruits Basket' manga. I especially love that her 'missing heart' can be literal or figurative :3
I look forward to seeing where you take this