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Love this story! Little thing thats bothering me however, is that when he interviews at the movie theater he says it is his first job. When in previous chapters when he is with his dad he says that he was working two jobs

This is really good! But I think you should reread it there are little mistakes like saying my instead of mine in chapter twenty. I like your writing style and how descriptive you are but I dont like how you explain things to the readers as if uour talking to them, idk if it was intentional or not but just my opinion. However the story line is very creative and you should try using more diction . :) I hope you update soon

Update!!!! I must read more

This story is breathe taking. I absolutely adore Christians character, you really feel bad for him as you start to learn about his life. Stark is such a sweet heart but also such a dick for pushing Christian to his limits with pretending to date Shane. It was a smart plan though. Do we ever find out what Stark did you get in trouble? And why does he like to be called Stark when he name is Dean. Which is nothing remotely close to Stark, just curious.

As much as I like seeing the two of them being all couple like and cute together. My favourite was reading about them before they got together. The tension and emotion, really got to me. Your writing was phenomenal. I was seriously heart-broken when Christian left Stark. I seriously thought he was never coming back and Stark was moving on and forgetting about poor Christian. SO MANY FEELS. There was one scene, not sure what chapter it was in. The scene where Christian was sitting on his window and Stark was talking about how he didn't like heights. I just got such a pretty picture in my head, Christian with his cigarette. Looking out into the window and Stark behind him.

FJLSJFSK, this is definitely one of the best slashes I have read on here. I hope you update soon. c:

@ InoShikaCho
oh yes, I've realized that but it's more because when Christian is at his father's he's a completely different person, and when he's with his mother he returns to his reserved self. He's a very troubled human being, in the sense that everything at his father's is completely different from at his mother's. But thank you for letting me know! It's going to become more apparent as the story continues on. :)

I really adore your writing style and use of description. I don't know if you noticed the inconsistency in Christian's story though. In Chapter 15 it says that he had two jobs, and then, in Chapter 19 it says that he is nervous because he's never had a job before.

It is a very cute story though. I like it a lot. =3

New reader here loveèeeeeee/adore this story update plzzzz

I'm nervous for them :33

This keeps on getting better and better with each chapter:) I love it. I'm excited for more.

AH! That was sexy~! I love it so far <3 <3 <3 and I can't wait for more sexiness. :>

AH! That was sexy~! I love it so far <3 <3 <3 and I can't wait for more sexiness. :>

-anticipation!!!!-

NO WHY DID YOU END IT THERE!?!?!?!!?
I WANT SOME SEXY TIME!!!!!!!!!!
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Cute update I'm loving watching their relationship unfold. Update soon! :)

Update soon? I miss this :(

I really hope you update soon, because I am so hooked on this story! (:

I really, really, really love this story. Like, I'm in love with it. Please update soon, I need you to. :3 x

As to chapter two's title I totally thought of Jace's famous quote in City Of Bones in the Mortal Instruments series, to love is to destroy. Then Clary proves him wrong. Total fangirl moment.

So I basically just read this all in one sitting and I have to admit I am absolutely hooked! It's so good, one of the best I've read on here. I'm gonna check out your other stories too :) Update soon?

Great chapter, update soon!