I'll Be Right Beside You - Comments

Can't wait for more!! :)

Awwww! Well I'm glad that she is "home!" Hopfully that will be a step in the right direction and she will get better soon.
Love Jordan! He is wonderful. I hope he can help her see how amazing she is soon. <3

I think you have two chapters called ten ;) hehe, so cute..

Everything I've thought about this has been said in the comments below. So yeah.. What they said ;) good chapter.

I just love your story! Can't wait for the next update:)

Oh dear.... I'm glad that Jordan is willing to step up and keep her from playing to potentally save her life. Holy shit balls....
I'm also glad that her mom called a big old bull shit on her. I think she needed to hear it and I also think she will need to hear it again and again. I think that she will also need to hear how much the team is behind her. The team should all come together and tell her how much she means to them and I think they should also all try to help her so she doesn't do this shit again. Oh and Jared should yell at her. But yeah.... I liked it. I hope she gets better soon.

She is still an idiot and Jordan is perfectly in the right to yell at her. If she was really sorry, she wouldn't have done it. Not really, but she and Jordy are a package deal so she should know that what affects her affets him. Get a grip girl. Sorry I'm so mean, but she pisses me off. It's really good though.

Oh my you cant leave us here like this

Idiot! What the hell did she go and do something like that for?! Life isn't always sunshine and daisies lady! Get over it and move on! Does she honestly think anyone wants her to work so hard she hurts herself? I think not! She should be benched until she gets her weight back up and no working out! That will teach her! You want to play? Then do it the right way or you won't. Grrrr she makes me so mad. I don't know who the hell volunteers to have a stay in the hospital, but that's what she did! She's going to get the biggest lecture from Becka! I really just want to slap her in the face and knock some sense into her.

Poor Jordan, he about shit his pants. I hope he is okay.

Awesome chapters! I loved it even if I had to rant ;)

I expected something like this.. Also a worse scenario actually.. Hmm... Good chapters.

Are you trying to kill me!?!?!? Can't wait for you to make this all right and make her healthy again. Can't wait for the next one :)

i like the new chapters cant wait for more

:-( :-( :-( :-( :-( :-( Je n'aime pas. Poor Cam!! I hope she's ok!!

I am not surprised that Cam has passed out. She has been driving herself past the point of being healthy. Between the over exertion, all the stress she has been under, and I am sure that her eating habits have not been great either, her poor body is just shutting down.

I hope it is just a case of severe dehydration and not something more serious.

LONGER UPDATES

I CAN'T TAKE THESE SHORT CHAPTERS

THEY'RE KILLING ME

OH MY GODDDD

Poor Cam!! Sad face!!!!! :-( I liked this POV btw... Can't wait for more!

awwwwwwwwww poor cam. please more soon

I really liked that you changed it up a bit and gave us a little glimse of Becka and Sid - I always thought there was a story there, too, but I digress!!

You are still giving the same message - that Cam is in big trouble - but you are giving it through someone else's eyes. It also shows that it isnt just Jordan being paranoid - that eveyone is seeing that if things dont change soon, Cam is going to crash and burn.

I hope she is oing to be ok!

Dude, this is so depressing that it is depresing me and that is hard to do. I'm seriously worried about Cam. Everyone needs to get over the fact that Cam is a girl. it's getting old real fast that people are having a hard time accepting her. Get over your rather large egos and get on with life.

I also hate that she is worrying Jordan so much. She needs to get a grip on herself. I know it is pretty bad right now, but she has to know that things will get better. As long as the team supports her, that's all that really matters. I love how caring Jordan is by the way. It's so adorable. At times overbearing, but right now it's cute because right now she needs taken care of since she is clearly off her rocker. I just hope it all works out soon.

Also, thanks for the lovely review. I'm more inspired for the chapter to come so hopefully it will be up soon. I don't know for sure though because this semester at school is seriously kicking my butt. I will try my best because I am so close to finishing it. I can feel it, now only if I could do it.

I really hope that she's going to be treated the way she was before because it's killing me to see her like that. I love cam's strongness but seeing the hurt in her makes me hurt. But i still love this.
-S