I'll Be Right Beside You - Comments

I'm excited to find out what happens next, update soon!!

poor cam is getting sick now, but jordy is so sweet.

I hope Cam gets everything together - this has all been so difficult for her.

But with the support of Jordan, I am sure that they will be able to work through all this.

Awwww.... Jordy is so sweet. I love how he cares enough about her to contact her family. I really hope everything works out well...and quickly!!

i like the new chapter! cant wait for more.

and she was right about the other players.. damn.. I hope things will get better for her.. hmm.. good chapter

love the new chapter!! hope you are okay.

poor poor cam. Grrrrrrrrr hate the caps Please update soon.

I feel badly for Cam - they certainly arent making things easy for her. I really hope she doesnt get hurt again.

And I hope you are feeling ok - I have had whiplash and it is no fun at all!!

Grr!! Its not fair they're treating her like that!! I mean It would probably happen in real life, but seriously, I WANT COCKY CAM BACK. Like "Bitch you played me before and I beat you." Sorry for the swear haha I just want to beat em all up for refusing to play her because she's a girl. Seriously.

Aw cam :( that's not cool at all. Leave it to the caps to be douches though...

Poor Cam!! I hope the guys start actually playing against her. I mean, I think its really nice that they didn't want to hurt her but I would feel the same way she does.

Hope your injury is nothing serious and you get feeling better!!

Damn... That's got to suck. I know I had sort of expected Someghing like that.. At some point in my mind.. Hmm.. I hope she's not right about the other players and games and such.. Hmmm... Good chapter.

Oh Vero, you are seriously so awesome all the time. AND she's officially a Fleury! But anyway I loved how they both thought she was going to beat the crap out of Cam or something, it was so amusing to read. I also love how you write in their accents so completely that I can literally hear it in my head. I enjoy that aspect so much! I love accents so much. Mostly because everyone says I have a southern one and I'm not southern...

Jordan could you possibly give her any space? She pushes you away cause she wants to be alone and you making her feel guilty about that is not cool. I love how Sid and Becka are getting closer and Cam and Jordan didn't even notice. Way to go best friends, you are doing a bang up job lol. They had their own stuff going on, so its understandable.

I hope the game goes well for them! I want it to reinforce how awesome Cam is. She really needs that extra boost of confidence. I also hope meeting the wives and girlfriends go well for Cam. Her and the team are tight, so its not like they can get her traded. I want them to realize that and just skip their rude feelings or being mean to her and be friends, but I know there is always one who just wants to be mean for the sake of being mean. Oh well. Can't wait to see what happens!

P.S. The only thing I've been doing at school is studying and sleeping. Sorry for the delay.

jordan and cam are so sweet together. but i wish cam would just chill a little. she needs it. she's doing fine and i hope the next chapter includes the game from cam's pov. i know you said it would be jordan in the beginning but i just want to know what she's really thinking.

1. I got on Mibba today for the first time in a while and was SO EXCITED to see that you're posting this story now.
2. I'm really curious to know if you're going to write Jordan's move to Carolina into the story. Potential conflict for another sequel?
I can't wait for more!

I hope that Cam realises soon what an amazing player she is. I'm glad that the guys are starting to try to help her feel better. I feel bad for Jordan, it has to be hard to see someone you love hurting and not be able to do much to help them.

I hope that Cam does not drive herself too hard - she could end up sick, if she is not careful.

But it is good that more of the guys are coming around, and seeing Cam as a player - more importantly, a teammate - rather than just a "girl". I think Sid can really help out here because he knows what it is like to be constantly under scrutiny and always feeling like he has to be better than everyone to prove he is worthy of all he has.

And having mentioned Sid, I would love to read a bit more about he and Becka. They seem so cute together.

YAY! I'm glad that she going to try and make things up to him by opening up more. I kind of wish the guys would tell their wives that she doesn't come in the lockeroom, that made me sad. But honestly I wish the guys would just quit letting her fret, they'd still take a check for her and all. I know that it all has a purpose but I really hope that at the game the other guys don't treat her different because that's just going to send her in a slum. Love it can't wait for more.
-S

AWW Jordy. Man life is hard for her. hope the guys start liking her again soon. Please update