Awwwww :) Jordan's so supportive of her, that's really cute! I can't wait for the new chapter, and I hope the media doesn't make a huge deal about this.
The first few lines of the story had me really anxious. I thought they wouldn't have accepted her. I'm so excited for the next chapter now that I know where they stand.
WHOOO!!! Geno just might be my favorite character every right now. The way he handled it was amazing, and I can't wait to see how the rest of the team truly handles it :D
I'm soooooooooooooooo happy that this story is getting started!!! AHHH! Great first chapter! I know this is going to be a fantastic story just like the last one! Can't wait for more! :D
AWW yeah!! :-D I'm soooooooo happy this story is getting started!!!!!!! :-D
Geno is perfect! I love him so much its not even funny. This was an amazing chapter. I like how every one on the team didnt' just flat out freak out or just accept her, because I don't think that they would all react the same way. This was a really good starting chapter and I can't wait for more! :-) <3
AWWWWW!!! Geno! You're so cute when you just go with the flow! I love his character already! He really made this chapter special. I am so happy with what you did with his character. The way you wrote Kris' accent and the French you put in here was a really great decision. I could practically hear him in my head talking so that made me really happy as well.
I absolutely loved Jordan's little oh crap moment when he came to Cam's defense. I think it was spot on and a really logical and well thought out statement. Dan's defense was perfect too especially when he addressed the fathers in the room. I am kind of pissed at James for not accepting her right off the bat, I'll just have to knock some sense into him ;)
Overall I think this is a great kickoff point for the sequel. I am ecstatic with how the first official chapter came out. Just something to think about, I think your chapter quality is better when you have some space between updates. I think that's really for everyone though, especially myself. Chapters are much better when they come irregularly and with a few days between. It gives you time to ponder specific parts and the chapter's overall relevence to the plot. I know I have to think a lot before posting updates. I love your stories and I am not trying to offend you or anything so please don't take it that way. I will read your work no matter what because you are very talented. Awesome update!
This was so dramatic and sweet, you have no idea. I loved Geno and TK in this one. AHHHH, I currently can't form coherent thoughts, so I'm going to leave you with the fact that I CANNOT wait for more.
I'm so excited about this this story. I can't wait to see what you have planned and how things will go from here. Now that cam soon will be a girl to the world, it's going to get hectic for everyone.. I think.. Good chapter.