November 22nd, 2013 at 04:15am
Okay I just got caught up! I think the break from the story did you good. When this story started I thought it was going in a completely unfocused direction and now it seems to have regained it's focus. I don't know if you needed the break or I did. It was probably me because I took a hiatus from hockey fiction after this story was put on hiatus. Can't have too much of a good thing I suppose.
I'm glad Claude is out of the picture. It just didn't seem plausible for someone to willingly go out with Cam when she had just gotten out of a serious relationship. I mean who wants to be the rebound guy? Also, I'm glad Jared and Jordan aren't all up in arms with each other about Cam. Jared needs to stay out of Jordan and Cam's business. I understand that he's Cams best friend but it's a little weird hearing your best friend complain about your brother. I think both Cam and Jordan put him in a really tough position and I'm glad he's out of it for now. I like the direction the story is going and I especially like all the family time the Staals are having. It reminds me why I love them all lol. That's all I have for now. I might not review frequently but I'm still here! I look forward to the next update and the fact that Cam and Jordan are getting their shit together. Okay I have to go cause I'm at the Pens game and I can't type and watch at the same time lol. BYE!
-S