I'll Be Right Beside You - Comments

  • Marinesister92

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    I will wait all dag-on day for this dear. I almost cried myself at how jordan felt I seriously just wanted to wrap him up and hug him and tell him to remember so he could fix it. But then I wanted to hold Cam cause she was so hurt by what he did. best study break read i've had in a while.
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    November 22nd, 2013 at 04:15am
  • Colby_Armstrong9

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    Okay I just got caught up! I think the break from the story did you good. When this story started I thought it was going in a completely unfocused direction and now it seems to have regained it's focus. I don't know if you needed the break or I did. It was probably me because I took a hiatus from hockey fiction after this story was put on hiatus. Can't have too much of a good thing I suppose.

    I'm glad Claude is out of the picture. It just didn't seem plausible for someone to willingly go out with Cam when she had just gotten out of a serious relationship. I mean who wants to be the rebound guy? Also, I'm glad Jared and Jordan aren't all up in arms with each other about Cam. Jared needs to stay out of Jordan and Cam's business. I understand that he's Cams best friend but it's a little weird hearing your best friend complain about your brother. I think both Cam and Jordan put him in a really tough position and I'm glad he's out of it for now. I like the direction the story is going and I especially like all the family time the Staals are having. It reminds me why I love them all lol. That's all I have for now. I might not review frequently but I'm still here! I look forward to the next update and the fact that Cam and Jordan are getting their shit together. Okay I have to go cause I'm at the Pens game and I can't type and watch at the same time lol. BYE!
    November 19th, 2013 at 02:30am
  • Capt. Morgan

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    Jenson and Jared are beautiful. <3 Love this story and can't wait for more!
    November 18th, 2013 at 11:17pm
  • lexwashere22

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    love this.
    November 1st, 2013 at 05:01am
  • Marinesister92

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    Girl i'd wait for weeks jut to read how she's coming along. I'm glad to see that she's told him what's going on and got claude out of her life. That was for the best honestly. I really hope that things work out in a way that's good for them all.
    -s
    October 22nd, 2013 at 08:24pm
  • synonymforsarcasm

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    such a conflict of emotions
    October 22nd, 2013 at 04:56pm
  • hockeychick37

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    this is literally so sad! update soon!
    October 22nd, 2013 at 12:50pm
  • Fairart

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    Awwh he finally knows the truth. Please let everything work out!
    October 22nd, 2013 at 06:30am
  • Capt. Morgan

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    Love it! I hate that Cam and G broke up but now hopefully all the characters can start to heal. :-) Can't wait for more!
    October 22nd, 2013 at 05:36am
  • kateerose12345

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    Love it! I'm glad they started to tell him what's going on I hope he remembers soon
    October 22nd, 2013 at 04:53am
  • error404

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    This was the first fanfiction I have read on Mibba. Actually, the first proper fanfiction I had ever read. I didn't have an account back in the day, and after reading the prequel, I completely forgot the story's name. I remember reading the first hundred chapters in a single day, that's how much I adored the story. And recently I found it (THANK GOD) and I started all over again, loving it even more. Thank you so much for this story! I know it's probably something you enjoy doing, but it's also something that inspires others. It inspired me to begin writing fanfics and all. So THANK YOU <3
    October 12th, 2013 at 12:18pm
  • Marinesister92

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    I really can't wait to see how this ends up. I'm nervous and scared about how this could go. because she's dating the enemy but his family loves her like she is a Staal and it should be that way. I mean hell he was going to be gay for her. I just want to see them both happy.... love it and can't wait.
    October 4th, 2013 at 02:33am
  • Capt. Morgan

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    Awwww. I can't wait to see how this will play out. I am kinda nervous for how Jordan will react.
    October 4th, 2013 at 01:45am
  • Katie.Kit.Kat

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    Holy fuuuuck! I can't wait to see what happens when they tell him :3 I'm so scared for her... Like I feel so bad. I want to just hug them both and coddle them haha
    October 3rd, 2013 at 10:44pm
  • Fairart

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    Hajj! I can wait to know what happens next!
    September 21st, 2013 at 03:35pm
  • lexwashere22

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    I loved this so much! I'm so glad you are back again. :)
    September 21st, 2013 at 06:54am
  • LDW Choice

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    I loved the update. PS I think that Claude should go!
    September 21st, 2013 at 05:17am
  • Marinesister92

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    I honestly loved the update. even if it was short. It's all the more exciting to see her around her lug of a best friend. I really hope she just talks to Jordan to figure out where things need to go. So she can get her feelings out and the hurt they caused each other. Because I know they were happy together, hell I think we all do. But she has to realize that forgiveness is sometimes the only answer.

    On a more personal note, glad to see you back here so quickly. And quite frankly I'm even more happy to see that you know that we're here for you. We create a special bond with our readers and it becomes almost like a support group.
    September 21st, 2013 at 02:20am
  • Katie.Kit.Kat

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    I AM SO FUCKING GLAD YOU'VE STARTED WRITING AGAIN YOU HAVE NO IDEA. I'm so sorry to hear things have been shitty for you. I hope they get better!! <3
    I can't wait to see what you do with the story still. I've been hanging in waiting for the rest and I'm so excited to keep reading!! You're wonderful! <3
    September 21st, 2013 at 01:06am
  • Thatmom

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    Would love to see her and Jordan get back together:).
    September 21st, 2013 at 12:57am