Ginny's Story - Comments

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I'm not really into Harry Potter fics based on canon characters, I like OC's because in fanfic, I like to imagine its me an ehh, I found Ginny to be really boring. But it seems like a good start... I would suggest uping the excitement though, just relationship and no action gets boring. Also your grammar/spelling is good so far! Though, I would change your layout, it’s a bit distracting.

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I'm not into Harry Potter, I never watched the movie nor read the book. So, I was a little confused. But other than that, I like it. I like the layout, it's cute. I'm not much of a criticizer, I have no room to talk about other people's stories when they have their own flow with style. Speaking of flow; I like your writing style. It was very easy to follow along. Now spelling and grammar errors; Honestly, I didn't see anything. But yet I'm not very well at those...so they're might be some, but I didn't notice (: I like it so far, it's good. I hope you continue to update.

I can honestly say this is the first HP fanfic I've ever read. Comment Swap brought me here.

So. I like the idea. But I think it needs something else. Since the characters are all based on, well, real characters, you need to adapt them and develop them to make them unique to you. Also, there are a few punctuation issues (excessive punctuation) but other than that it seems ok. I'll check I on the story again soon. :)

I'm usually very into Harry Potter, but so far it didn't seem like there was a whole lot going on. I don't know if you plan to keep this story only focused on their relationship, but I suggest adding some of the action and fight scenes to spice it up a bit. I know it's difficult to figure out the whole layout thing, I haven't figured it out yet either, but I agree. A custom layout makes your story more appealing. Good luck with your story :)

I think you should make a layout so the story would see more interesting. But anyways I like how you morphed the original Harry Potter with your version, that was very clever. I agree that you should make it more exciting, but you still have a good start so keep it up.

A layout would be the best place to start. I'm not a big Harry Potter fan and because of that I didn't even really want to read it. It seems really... Plain. Like there's nothing very exciting. Couldn't make it passed chapter one, I'm sorry. Keep trying, though!

So truthfully, I had a hard time reading this. I only read the first chapter, but it was far to simple and almost dull in my mind. Also, the lack of a layout made me less interested in reading it because of just how generic it looks and feels.

I’ve been getting a lot of Harry Potter fan fic lately, this is the second one in a row comment swap has given me. Though I’m not really into the series I thought this was a pretty good fan fiction so far. The first chapter was harder to read, but the second chapter came along nicely. A different plot, but one that fits nicely with the HP line. Great writing, keep it up!

{Comment Swap} oh thank heavens it's Harry Potter!!! Alright I'm glad that you started spacing out in the second chapter! It sounds quiet good. I'm not really into these type of HP stories I'm more into the OC type but I'm subscribing just to see how it turns out!! Good luck!

So I thought you captured Ginny's personality well, and I was pleasantly surprised that Comment Swap sent me to a Harry Potter Fanfiction, now usually I would read ones that include an OC(Original Character) because those are the ones that I most enjoy, but, this was an enjoyable experience.

Keep Writing and Good Luck