July 27th, 2012 at 05:00pm
I got this in the comment swap, even though I was planning to read it anyway. Lol!
First off, Jason is a major dick. I absolutely wanna put that stupid gun to his fucking head and pull the trigger three times. But that's what makes this story interesting. His sadistic mind is very intriguing.
Hayley is my idol. She cares so much for Matt that she let Jason rape her just to keep him safe, even though he ended up blowing his brains out in the end. I nearly cried during that entire rape scene. I felt so bad for both Matt and Hayley.
The layout is very good. The only concern I have is the black words on the repeated picture on the gun. It makes the story just a little hard to read. I'd suggest a deep red, like the color of red velvet. Nothing too bright.
I really enjoyed this. You earned another recommendation. -A
This was twisted. I don't even know what else to say.
Good job and good luck!