Sadly, I'm not a fan of One Direction so I didn't particularly enjoy this fan-fic. That is my opinion only, however, and I'm sure lots of readers disagree with me.
I have to say I'm not really a fan of One Direction, but this story was greatly written. Very original, even though it's a fan fiction. Note: In the 5th line of the 1st paragraph it says 'lne' instead of 'line'.