-eyes go wide and they water- nooo. THAT can't happen! jacob and devon NEED to be together! otherwise evvery religious person will die :L god i hate religion, hehehee. i think i shall subscribe to this, update soon? :] x
“Chrystopher Philip Robinson! That’s going to cost you a detention.”
“What’d I do now?”
“The faculty here at St. Mary’s will not tolerate profanity.”
“Oh Jesus Christ,” I mumbled.
His eyes grew so damn wide, I though his eyes balls were gonna fall right out, “Did you just say the Lord’s name in vain?!”
“…No, I said, ‘I could go for some cheese and rice.’ It’s quite good, actually. Try it some time.” That is prolly my favourite party of the whole story.. haha!!!! please update it pretty-- no, SEXY please??
WHAT! NO?! new reader =] Anyways, I was just getting into it and then that happened! Darn you. Constructive criticism; I love it an' all but I there are a few things that I don't think are very realistic. First of all, most priests would be more patronising than fire and brimstone. They'd be like, "Chrystopher, Jesus is your friend," rather than "DID YOU JUST TAKE THE LORD'S NAME IN VAIN?!". Secondly, I think it'd make more sense for Devon to be secretly crushed than to shriek that he was going to have sex with Chrys right in front of his Dad. Apart from that, I love it =] XoXo
...I couldn't find the marching band update, but I bet my friend Allie could =P I just read the whole thing so far, and its pretty much amazing! I wanna see how this turns out! More soon? PLLLLEEEEEEEEASE?
anyways... I can't belive Devon actually...like believed what he said. Like he should know that Chrys was only sticking up for him trying to like...change what the father thought about the whole situation not like....make things that bad... *tear*