The Chemistry Of Two - Comments

  • Call Me Moonlight

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    *claps* i'm so excited!
    February 10th, 2009 at 01:20am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Awesome update.
    February 10th, 2009 at 01:01am
  • M451n

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    AHHHH! they can over come it !I know it!
    February 10th, 2009 at 12:18am
  • StarCatcher

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    I loveee it !!
    Update soon !!

    *subscribes*
    <3
    February 4th, 2009 at 07:27pm
  • StarCatcher

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    I loveee it !!
    Update soon !!

    *subscribes*
    <3
    February 4th, 2009 at 07:27pm
  • frank turner.

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    -eyes go wide and they water-
    nooo. THAT can't happen! jacob and devon NEED to be together! otherwise evvery religious person will die :L god i hate religion, hehehee. i think i shall subscribe to this, update soon? :]
    x
    December 30th, 2008 at 02:22pm
  • Write Naked

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    Awh.
    :[

    Moar soon.
    December 6th, 2008 at 10:59pm
  • William Beckett.

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    ALL RIGHT.

    So this is my second time reading all of the chapters? You know what I want now?

    An UPDATE. :D
    November 30th, 2008 at 03:42pm
  • Angelus.

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    Aaawww, no, poor Devon! Cry

    I LOVE this story, can't wait for more! =D
    November 22nd, 2008 at 12:16pm
  • k.louise

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    “You’re fucking joking.”

    “Chrystopher Philip Robinson! That’s going to cost you a detention.”

    “What’d I do now?”

    “The faculty here at St. Mary’s will not tolerate profanity.”

    “Oh Jesus Christ,” I mumbled.

    His eyes grew so damn wide, I though his eyes balls were gonna fall right out, “Did you just say the Lord’s name in vain?!”

    “…No, I said, ‘I could go for some cheese and rice.’ It’s quite good, actually. Try it some time.”
    That is prolly my favourite party of the whole story.. haha!!!!
    please update it pretty-- no, SEXY please??
    November 22nd, 2008 at 09:50am
  • Venomous.Vampire

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    WHAT! NO?!
    new reader =]
    Anyways, I was just getting into it and then that happened!
    Darn you.
    Constructive criticism; I love it an' all but I there are a few things that I don't think are very realistic. First of all, most priests would be more patronising than fire and brimstone. They'd be like, "Chrystopher, Jesus is your friend," rather than "DID YOU JUST TAKE THE LORD'S NAME IN VAIN?!". Secondly, I think it'd make more sense for Devon to be secretly crushed than to shriek that he was going to have sex with Chrys right in front of his Dad.
    Apart from that, I love it =]
    XoXo
    October 30th, 2008 at 11:03pm
  • Pansyxlivesxon

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    ...I couldn't find the marching band update, but I bet my friend Allie could =P
    I just read the whole thing so far, and its pretty much amazing!
    I wanna see how this turns out!
    More soon?
    PLLLLEEEEEEEEASE?
    October 23rd, 2008 at 12:02am
  • Psycho Lunatic

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    Awesome update.
    October 19th, 2008 at 10:34am
  • Laura Ryan

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    I just discovered this. And its officially my new favorite thing i the world. :D
    Update soon please. <3
    October 11th, 2008 at 07:26am
  • Jericho.

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    Squee!!! More or I shall HUNT YOU DOWN AND BEAT YOU TO DEATH WITH A GIANT COOKIE.
    October 8th, 2008 at 09:10pm
  • HystericxBarbie

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    Aww, that's soo sad that Devon couldn't see that Chrys was lying. Cry

    Update when you can, please <3
    October 3rd, 2008 at 05:33am
  • SaveYourDreamingx

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    YAY for you finding your notebook!
    =D =D
    Dude.
    Fix it.
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    Please?
    =[
    <33xx
    October 2nd, 2008 at 12:04am
  • sailor emo

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    that was so awww

    totally mucked up those poor boys and in all honesty devon should have relsied he was only saying it.

    stupid boy

    awesome update

    PAGE CLAIM!
    September 30th, 2008 at 08:57pm
  • Faitily;Yours

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    aaa damn. i don't know the refrence....

    anyways... I can't belive Devon actually...like believed what he said. Like he should know that Chrys was only sticking up for him trying to like...change what the father thought about the whole situation not like....make things that bad... *tear*

    awww, my heart goes out to you Chrys!
    September 30th, 2008 at 06:57am
  • neonbluepunk

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    i read the chapter three times...
    no marching band referances that i could see...
    anyways, THANK YOU!
    =D
    September 30th, 2008 at 02:55am