Crossroads - Comments

Okay so I love this so far!! It's very different than anything else and I like that about it :) update soon please and thank you!!

I got this through comment swap:) I'd never heard of The Maine before, so I wasn't really sure what I was supposed to expect, good storyline so far, very flowing:)
Keep writing! And good luck:)xoxoxo

This is fairly decent so far. There were a few typos (it's "rouge" lipstick, not rogue, unless the lipstick was once a secret agent and decided to betray everyone, which would, admittedly, be an odd twist of events.) and some of the beginning was a bit "purple," but overall this is a fairly decent story. I don't listen to The Maine so I have no idea who these guys are, but I'm going to go out on a limb and say this is different from most stories about this band. I also like how you gave Esther a name that would correspond with the time period she came from (there weren't a lot of female Addisons or Brittneys in 1940s England as far as I know.) Just look for a few typos and keep up the good work!