Xenia 1 - Comments

Comment swap, here! Much like the person below me, I'm not entirely sure what to think of this. I'm very confused, but also intrigued at the same time. The grammar is a little wacky, but that's an easy fix. Other than that, the story is interesting. There's a mysterious aspect to it and I kind of like that. Fix the grammar and it will be really good!

Comment swap brought me here - not entirely sure what to make of this story yet but it certainly did keep me wondering. The descriptions were good - a little much on the ! Exclamations at times but not distracting. I think it’s a lovely start. Keep it up.