The Vampire Prince's Servant - Comments

ending definitely needs work...but other than that its great! just PLEASE fix the ending

I love this story so much, but I just feel like the ending was a bit abrupt......however all the other chapters were wonderful :)

I dont like the ending!

I'm being such a retard for saying this but.... GO WITH HIM!!!!!!

LOL! Oh wow. Julian is such an ass. "Yeah you can go home." and then...... "You can come back on your own accord, or I could always make you go." Lmfao. This story is great, I love it. Please update soon! (:

I think it's sweet how he says he needs her<3 update please:)

I love your story!! Please update as soon as possible!!! I love anything with the supernatural and wow...you caught my interest with in the first line. It was a great read! I loved every part of it. Great work! I cannot wait to read more!!! Update as soon as you can! I want to know what happens already! Let it be known, if you ever decided to publish this...I would buy it :D

Update soon pretty please?!

OMG Please UPDATE!!!!! :D need to know whats going to happen next!

PLEASE UPDATE I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT I LOVE THIS STORY <3

Its so good! I'm so happy he saved her. But I bet the wrath of Jared isn't far behind...

YAY! He saved her, I officially love him:P Update soon:)x

Please update soon!!:)x

Update soon!!!!

oh. my. goodness! Jared needs a swift kick in the balls and I would love to do so ;) but seriously I need to know more I need her to escape it would be totally bad ass, even though i already imagine that you have planed on how to end it but that's all im hopping for plus that kick :D anyway cant wait for more

Ohhh goodness! I want to keep reading. :D its so good.

I did not expect that. But who all died? And how could none of them take jared on??? Update soon!

OOOO I like Jared even more now.. It would be great if he was psycho to everyone else but her. I can't get the sweet Jared out of my head.

well in all honesty the first thing i thought when i realized he killed them was 'Jared's going psycho?' and i am really interested in what is going to happen next and Jared is pretty sexy ;) <3 cant wait for more

Oh god!!!!!!! Im in love with this story (: Please please please update soon!