First comment, cool. I thought it was very interesting how you used second person narration for the entire story, and you didn't break from that. There were actually no grammar mistakes that could be seen. I thought that this was actually a great short story. I think you hands down deserve two thumbs for this. Good luck in the contest.
First comment, cool. I thought it was very interesting how you used second person narration for the entire story, and you didn't break from that. There were actually no grammar mistakes that could be seen. I thought that this was actually a great short story. I think you hands down deserve two thumbs for this. Good luck in the contest.