Behind the Seams - Comments

JessiRoad (300)

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Hurry up with the sequel!!!! I am so Anxious to continue reading

November 8th, 2013 at 04:28am

Smallmeade (100)

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Woooo, that was such a cliff-hanger xD I really can't wait to see what happens in the 2nd part :D

March 8th, 2013 at 06:41am

Katherine-Lynn (100)

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Omg this was so perfect! Thank you for writing this. I can't wait for the second part :)

March 6th, 2013 at 04:10pm

Katherine-Lynn (100)

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This is so good, I need to read more!

February 12th, 2013 at 09:29pm

Smallmeade (100)

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Ahh I love it! Read the whole thing in a day. Can'twait for the next chapter & part 2!

February 10th, 2013 at 11:21pm

ShellySadistic (100)

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Subscribed! Read all 8 chapters in one afternoon! The storyline is wonderful (even though I'm a huge Peeta fan and not Gale), and like I said, even being a Peeta fan, this is a great story! The only thing I feel bothers me is that the writing seems kinda harsh. Too many "did not"s or "have not"s makes it hard for me to read. I would recommend using more "didn't" and "haven't" to make the diction flow better. But that's just my opinion.

Overall, absolutely lovely! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

November 2nd, 2012 at 02:49am

Darth Vader (100)

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Aww, loved it

October 23rd, 2012 at 03:59pm

Darth Vader (100)

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Hey! So um... this is an amazing story

I love what you've done with the characters.
Subscribing and can't wait for the next chapter!

October 9th, 2012 at 06:47am

lumosmancer (150)

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Good chapter:)

October 8th, 2012 at 09:36pm

call;me;biles (100)

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@ xxemergencyy
No they aren't watching. So at this point they have no idea what's going on.

October 8th, 2012 at 04:45pm

xxemergencyy (100)

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So, they don't know that Katniss and Peeta are acting like they're in love? Or did I just miss something?

October 8th, 2012 at 09:37am

lumosmancer (150)

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Plus I hope you get Gale and Larsen together:)

September 29th, 2012 at 12:05pm

lumosmancer (150)

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Brilliant chapter!
Update?:)

September 29th, 2012 at 12:05pm

Katie Mosing (33815)

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Let me just say that I am ecstatic that you said whom correctly instead of who. Seriously, just wonderful. I really just love this story. I absolutely adore The Hunger Games so I am always happy to read a Hunger Games fan fiction! Yours is interesting and I like that you went in the alternate universe route, which is something that is not done very often! I can’t wait to see how Gale and Larsen cope with losing their loved ones in the games and how their relationship is going to develop. I’m also excited to see if Peeta still has a crush on Katniss in this fic! I really hope you update soon!

September 28th, 2012 at 10:54pm