I cried so much! I usually don't cry reading fanfictions but this one absolutely broke my heart. Probably because I have gone through some of the events and I can relate to it. The ending seemed a bit off because everything happened too fast. But still, really good! :D
I liked the story of course, but i think it ended a little anticlimactic, like it all just happened so fast there really wasn't any time to feel bad for Matt and Kari for losing their mother, and there wasn't enough time for us to grasp why Matt was such an ass..
But thats just my thoughts, I cant wait for a sequel to this would you please let me know when you post it?
I am...speechless. this story was and is fucking amazing. I'd punch a newborn walrus if it meant you'd make a sequel. The ending.... the ending was just URGH sooooooo good. It was sweet. It wrapped up everything in nice and neat piles while leaving a few strands that will eventually turn into a beautiful blanket of engenouis plots and suspense.
To be completely honest, I really loved this story in the beginning. Towards the middle, I nearly stopped reading it because it pissed me off so much. But the ending... the ending was pretty dang good if I do say so myself. It was believable too, because honestly, the only type of thing that would hit home for Matt and his friends would be actually losing her (not to mention their mother's death). Because the whole time they were abusing her and being complete assholes (excuse my french :3), they live in there own little world where she would always be there for them to mess with. But the moment she indefinitely disappeared, their world came crashing down around them. That bit of reality was what made this story worthwhile for me. :)