Only Death Can Bring Us Together Now - Comments

@ Miz Erie
Wow. How fucking inspiring and kind of beautiful, in a twisted sense. Needless to say, I'm so happy you chose to write instead of taking the pills, and it make sense why Frank's feelings came across so genuinely.

@ Miss Stroup
I love Demolition Lovers. I actually wrote this instead of my suicide note. I was ready, pills in hand, and I sat down to type my last goodbyes. I had YouTube playing Black Parade, and the auto play played a clip of Gerard saying how suicide is stupid and nothing in life is worth killing myself over. I cried and wrote this instead. Gerard literally saved my life that day.

Thank you for seeing the beauty in this story.
xo Miz

Okay, first off, Demolition Lovers is my favorite song of all time ever so I'm so happy it's getting attention, although the attention came from a dark place in you so it's bittersweet.

Frank's fear of failure and ultimate decision to cut his losses and just kill himself and Gee is heart breaking but it read very easily in this story. In your notes you said the pacing felt to fast, but to be honest, it felt right to me as I felt Frank would be rushing everything to kill Gerard before he was too far gone to do it. And Gerard's love for him remaining strong despite Frank's hideous actions and Gee realizing that Frankie was in a bad mental state was really touching and just really goes to show what true love is. Where most people would go "WHAT THE FUCK, FUCK YOU." and attempt to kill Frankie, Gerard tries to save them BOTH until the end.

Fabulous story.

Oh wow! The story actually made me cry for Frank.

Oh my god! I like the depression, the fear, the love! I was pleasantly surprised at this! Awesome work <3

Oh my, that was truely brilliant! So painful, sad - But very beautifuly done. I'm always curious to see what you'll do next, as I'm sure you're aware! ;) Keep up the good work!

This was pure, utter amazingness.
You are a beautiful writer.

Wow o.o
At first, I was wondering how you were gonna execute this seeing the situation you started them in. Then when I realized what Frank was doing, I got scared, my eyes going wide as he downs the pills. I questioned his sanity, the, when he said, 'Oh, I’m going to perfect tonight. Flawless.'. Almost bit my tongue off when he started choking Gerard, relieved when he let go, then I froze when he stabbed him. And Gerard, concerned about Frank no matter what he did. That pulled on the heart-strings a little. Poor Frank, poor Gerard! Oh I think I'ma cry.
With both of them coated in Gerard’s blood, Gerard tries in vain to snuggle Frank’s limp body closer to his own. Gasping for air and unable to move anymore, he just looks at Frank’s face until darkness eventually envelops him.
Yup, definitely gonna cry ;~; OmGee, I love this. Is that strange? Ah, phooey, i don't care. I just love this.