She and Her Delusions - Comments

I really had no clue what Capgras Delusion was as I was reading this. I was confused as to why she wants to believe it's him but she doesn't at the same time. Obviously I thought it's the mental disorder but I wasn't so sure. As a reader I shouldn't have to guess it is the mental disorder and be left wondering what it is. I think you should somehow clarify that in the story.

Other then that this was fantastic. Simple but fantastic. I could see this as a full length story with alternating points of views. It would totally blow my mind and just be a lovely bittersweet story.

Got this from the comment swap machine. Very very good! I love this short story, it's size is perfect with the aura of the story and it's just so beautiful and sad at the same time. Me likes it alot:) hehe

Wow. This is so short and yet so good. I don't normally read stories which feature mental disorders(they depress me =/ Comment Swap guilty) but this is extremely well written. I've rec'd this because I think more people should read it. To be honest, if I were to give any advice, it would be to maybe write a little more of it. I think you could maybe write another visit, or maybe her recovering slightly. But... actually you know what, its perfect as it is. Im just greedy with stories =] in short: VERY WELL DONE.